I've always loved that you made Sirius a punk rocker. I am one and am only a year younger than all of the Marauders, so the time certainly fits. I was sorted into Gryppindore by Jo herself (Pottermore) so I figure me and Sirius would have been mates.

I enjoyed this! I wanted to specifically say I appreciate how although there's no graphic sex you portray Remus and Tonks and their relationship as much more sexual and secure in their sexuality than most fix writers. To me I feel this is more realistic given my own thoughts on their characters and I really appreciated it here! Thanks for writing and sharing!

I like how you took an aluded to event in the book and embelllished

this chapte nearly made me cry, sirius is so insensitive!

oh my god poor nymphadora! He knows it's her, I'm dying

ah yes, miss hinkypunk, as tonks would call her

Very well written and witty but none of Voldemort's minions will call him by his name. You might want to change it to "You do know the Dark Lord has returned!".

Geri, greed indeed. You really have a talent for allowing us to see insight into the characters that they're not paying attention to, especially Nymphadora in this chapter. She acknowledges that she's following the Black family streak (thereby absolving herself of responsibly in her mind, I think) without thinking through the implications. Very, very impulsive. And in this case greedy. Yikes, will be interesting to see where this goes!

Love the Toby Keith reference! :)

Oh my gosh! This is amazing!

Oh shite, Im going to have to wait a few days before reading remus's journal and the rest of tbe series. I'll burst into full on hyperventiling sobbingsnotty tears.

I really want sirius back *sobs* but then i dint want to take him away from lily and james.

Beautiful :)

Okay. You know how siriuss death didnt bring tears to my eyes because i was ins chool? Well im still in school but stuff that, my eyes are watering. Seeing Andy break break down...that was worse than seeing tonks's vision of what could never be,

I have hope that Cami can AND WILL. Bring Sirius back!

NO. NO NO NO. O NO NOO
WHY
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YYYYYYYYYYYYYY
*more sobbing*
HOW COULD YOU KILL OF SIRIUS? THIS CHAPTER (if iw asnt on school) BROKE MY HEART AND I AN ON THE VERGE OF TEARS.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Siriusly. Words typed or spoken cannot express how bloody adorable the ending was.
I love how willing Tonks os to do anyithing to be with Remus and I love how he compromised with her, beautiful 3

*sniggers* Hehehehe I can totally picture Forge trying to give Ginny away.
I love how Tonksie indirectly but intebtionally cheered harry up :)
And i love 'then youd better love me like its the last night of your l ife'

:)