This is great!

Kudos. Kudos x 1000. You did an amazing job representing both Issun and Amaterasu, and frankly, when squinting in the right light and direction, I found myself shipping it. Ah, the wonders and terrors of the Fandom Mind. Nontheless, you did an amazing job. Keep up the amazing work!

This story is a previous gift uvu

That was really sweet- thank you for writing it :D

Ah, it's so good! I really enjoy how you make the characters seem alive and serious and silly all at once. It's a very well written piece, kudos!

very great indeed

theres a lot of onefics out there but this has got to be THE BEST!

And is the story out of all of them that ive read that has the most ic chters.

in other words this story wins my heart over most of the 10-15 chp fics. good work

I loved it. There aren't a lot of good Okami fanfictions, but this one was briliant. You some how made Issun in character and his thinking about Ammy was so realistic, even the Game Makers be impressed :). A simple yet pleasing IssunxAmmy friendship.

Oh my goodness, this is so cute! Between Issun's complaining and Ammy's undeniable insistence on doing the right thing...Aww...

This is just such a heartwarming story.

~ Lang

This is really good, especially for a one-shot. Well written

I love Issun's stubborn refusal to think of Ammy as anything other than a foolish wolf at times. His voice in your writing is spot on, just like the game. I particularly like "This silly furball? Guide us?". That for some reason just felt like it could have slipped right into a game cutscene.

The section about feeding every animal she comes across was wonderful. I like how Issun doesn't really get it until he mentions it and realizes that Ammy isn't doing this for no reason.

Thanks so much for this, the game is one of my favorites of all time and this was a great tribute to the fandom!

OMG!Aw,so cute!But I was hoping for a little more AmmyXIssun,but I suppose there is some,if you awesome,though.

This was very cute! I could see Ammy giving Issun a blank stare after he asked her why she had to feed every animal. :) Keep up the good work!

Awesome! Okami is the best game ever and Issun is right, feeding all the monkeys, rabbits, dog, cats, boar, pigs, and deer can get quite time consuming!

Good narrative, you can feel the bond growing as Issun tells his tale .

First Okami fanfiction? Sweet. :)

*sniffle* T-T...