That was so sweet haha

This story was really interesting and inspired me for one of my other stories, so thank you!

I really enjoyed this story. The cuteness is too much for me to handle xD I loved how you made subtle references that Shuppet is May such as Caroline holding the infant Max in her arms or how Shuppet was saying that her father is going to become a gym leader. Just like other people already commented, ending the story with an open ending could have given us readers more fluffiness to enjoy, but oh well. Another ADV masterpiece that I would happily recommend to anyone.

That was a cute little one-shot.

That is the sweetest story I've ever heard. I loved it.

Gary really deserved that hit back then.

It was good

That was bootiful

Great job! Loved it! Just one thing — interest is PIQUED, not PEAKED.

This is so sweet...I wish it lasted longer ;)

Clever and cute. I like it!

that story about you and your girlfriend creepy but cool. Anyway that was a great story and a very sweet one. I loved it.
Draco122

Just asking, what is the significance of Squirtle & Shuppet? I can understand that the two should be a Kanto Pokemon and Hoenn Pokemon, respectively. Shuppet was a subtle hint to the identity of the mysterious child., that's where I get a gut feeling that Shuppet was May. It was a reference to their homeland. But why not Pikachu & Torchic, to add further reference to their starter Pokemon?

Okay, I just realised that making May masquerade as a Torchic would be too much of a hint and Shuppet is a ghost-type, symbolising the mysteriousness of yhe child but Squirtle was already revealed as Ash from the beginning so why was Ash Squirtle?

Anyways, not putting a kiss on the fic was great as a kiss would blur the focus of the story but I feel that the main point of the story would be further emphasised by omitting the scene where they became a couple. Instead, the ending would be them talking about realising that the two met in the past. The last paragraph was suitable & great, though.

Yes, the suggestion above would completely eliminate the romance and turn the fic into a pure friendship fic, but in no way does it reduce the AdvanceShipping. I mean they were about 5 when they first met so romance is just... no. On the other hand, friendship was a major theme of the fic so I feel that it would be appropiate to end it with friendship instead of romance.

love it!

According to me,This is one of the best Advanceshipping oneshots. At the beginning of this story when Ash was telling May his childhood past,I was wondering who was the kid wearing shuppet costume,but at the end I was really surprised to know that it was May! Good thing is that you did not put any kiss in this story, it could have spoiled the whole story. But since you didn't,this story is my favorite.