Reviews for A Halloween Treat
mk chapter 5 . 11/21/2010
I simply love this fic.
afrozenheart412 chapter 5 . 10/29/2010
Ah, Magnificent! From start to finish it has been a wild ride. Even though it wasn't a smutty finish it was a beautiful one and who could argue with that? Besides, to me, you left it open for more if you wanted to do more. Or a sequel.

Favorite moment

"They're jealous of you, Linds, easy as that," Danny told her.

"And why is that, exactly?" she questioned with a smile. How funny that his statement echoed Stella's, she mused. She almost missed his rejoinder.

"Prolly 'cause I haven't so much as looked at one of them…especially not since I met you, anyhow."

His admission shocked her.

"What?" she barely managed to whisper.

He shrugged and the grin he sent her made her weak in the knees.

"I don't need to look at anyone else, Linds," He confessed and watched as she once again flushed one of the most attractive shades of pink he'd ever seen."

Once again, it was all so them. I love how you are back and writing DL, it was awesome to see this again! Aiden and Stella, they were wonderful and so great at getting Danny to open up. They will both live on in all of the wonderful stories on here. But mostly in here. If I may ask? Will you continue with Captive, Danny and Lindsay in 50, and Interlude With the Vampire? More please? You are too good to lose!
afrozenheart412 chapter 4 . 10/29/2010
You may not like Rochelle and her cronies but they do allow you to let your evil side out. :)

Favorite lines

"They indulged in silence for a while, but Danny wanted to get things straight with them before the night ended.

"So, Montana, what would a guy have to do to get you to agree to go out with him?" he asked.

Lindsay shrugged.

"Is the guy you?"

He nodded.

"Simple. Just ask."

He blinked for a moment, somewhat surprised that she had chosen to be straightforward instead of giving him an answer laced with innuendo or humor. He decided to be just as honest.

"I should have done that a long time ago," he said with a serious tone that made her redden, "So Lindsay, will you go out with me?"

She simply nodded, afraid that if she opened her mouth she'd end up kissing him, which was something she definitely wanted to do, just not in front of all their co-workers.

He smiled down at her and they danced in silence for a few moments, feeling the weight of tension over the state of their relationship lift. Lindsay decided that she wanted to make sure Danny knew she was interested in him."

This has to be one of the best chapters to date, because they finally took that plunge and let each other know how they felt. Awesome! Now time for the strip poker and I will be in heaven!
afrozenheart412 chapter 3 . 10/29/2010
All I have to say is those witches are lucky that Danny respects Lindsay not to get in their face and take away her chance of standing up for herself. But I LOVE THE SAVE BY BOTH OF THEM! Take that, women!

As for Evil Stella and Guardian Angel Stella, they are both a blessed mix and so lovable. Mac does look hawt in my mind with the cape and tux! Lets hope this does work for both couples. On their almost kiss, so close yet so far away.
afrozenheart412 chapter 2 . 10/29/2010
Evil Stella is my favorite. You captured her perfectly and the way that it isn't hard to break Danny after a few beers. Like cracking an egg! As for cowboy Danny, he is HAWT! Now there is some down home country loving there! I hope Lindsay appreciates it. :D

As for her costume, I could totally see Danny losing the control to walk or even breath after he saw her. Marvelous!
afrozenheart412 chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
I know this is seriously late, because I have read all of this and THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING IT! It is one of my favorites because in here Stella is like a puppetmaster trying to get them to admit they like each other. Not to mention help Lindsay with her self esteem. Those lousy lab techs!

As for the comments Danny would make on Stella's costume choices, LMAO!
NothatRose chapter 5 . 10/28/2010
I have waited so long for your update on this. YESSS!

Thank you. Though, as you said : This is not a lovely smut-filled ending. You ended it with a line that leaves so much for my smut-filled mind to imagination. Wow!

I love the whole five chapters. But you know that don't you?
kirsten chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
Has this been finished or are you going to write more?
ameriker chapter 4 . 1/26/2008
Great story! I loved it all! And i could picture everything! And their scenes were HOT
twinkeyrocks chapter 4 . 6/23/2007
hahah this is so cute
ReJo chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
Oh, my goodness! This is an absolutely awesome story! Great job. I'll look for more stories from you.
bioassy chapter 4 . 11/11/2006
amazing

update soon!

Bioassy
moyeh chapter 4 . 11/11/2006
it as a cute chapter..hope you'll update soon!
wellthatdepends chapter 4 . 11/9/2006
*fanning self with hand*

this story is getting pretty Hot!

hehe, great job with this chappy.

Man, i can not get over the nerve of those lab girls!

But having Danny to protect her has to help.

Great reactions on Danny's part, can't wait to read more XD
Chiianna chapter 4 . 11/8/2006
Keep writing! i can't wait to find out what is next.
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