| Reviews for Symmetry |
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Morizono Kat chapter 1 . 6/1/2017 perfect...so beautifully written...made me weep |
yullumi56 chapter 1 . 6/27/2016 Just re-reading this tribute to Asuma. So many feelings. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2016 Beautifully written, so sad :( loved it! |
CaptainofherSoul chapter 1 . 4/26/2015 Oh my god this hurts so badly...this is actually the first time ive cried since a few weeks ago. Damn this is so late its like ten years already. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2013 SO goood! |
TripOverFlatSurfaces chapter 1 . 9/9/2012 Oh god, I'm starting to cry again. Huh, AsuKakaKure is really strange in that they fit together despite the fact that you don't see them interacting together very often in canon (because, you know, Naruto's the main character and all). The ending is so happy and content that it makes the story just that much more depressing. |
mabidiso chapter 1 . 1/17/2012 Beautiful, scary, sad. Intimate and affecting. |
poisonivylullabies chapter 1 . 8/9/2010 Asuma's ending comment is such bittersweet irony. -K.L. |
fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 2/14/2010 This piece had wonderful emotion attached to it. The flashbacks and the current story drifted seamlessly together and it was a full story of friendship, loss, and love. Now you have me wondering if Kakashi was late to Asuma's funeral. Of course if he was, it would be expected. It would be wonderful to know the reason behind it though. The detours you take are carefully crafted, and your style in this piece gives a great reflection on Asuma, Kakashi, and Kurenai's lives. There is no climax. It's as if that has passed and it's all a trip down memory lane. Thanks for sharing. |
Julie chapter 1 . 9/7/2009 ... This is absolute perfection. You had me tearing up and crying. Every single emotion was brilliantly captured. I don't know what to say other than...perfect. |
gracemis chapter 1 . 3/30/2008 this is really beautiful. thanks for sharing it. |
Eldr-Fire chapter 1 . 5/16/2007 Hmm. It was different, but I really liked it. Very profound, methinks. |
PactumServa chapter 1 . 1/16/2007 Thanks for such a wonderful fic! I still can't believe Asuma's no longer in Naruto anymore ... you portrayed everything beautifully. |
Dinero chapter 1 . 12/15/2006 I had the same disappointment when Asuma died. I like the idea of Kurenai Asuma and Kakashi. Good job.. -tear- |
beachlass chapter 1 . 12/9/2006 Wow. Just. Wow. You've so beautifully captured the playfulness of the spiral characters and linked them to the recent manga chapters, and it's heartbreaking and beautiful and makes my heart sing and ache. I've been a fan of your writing for a while, and this is a stunning example why. |