well, my thoughts, it's really good and i would HOPE that after about 2 years of being on Hiatus that you would be willing to get back into writing the story... just a thought...

liked your story, seeing the dates is the story dead?

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I really like the building relationship between Naruto and Remy. The boy needs to have someone he can trust and who'll take care of him; Naruto needs to be trusted and to have someone to protect.

After so long of being told he's not good enough, I think it will do Naruto a world of good to have Remy believe in him.

It's a promising start, and I'm looking forward to reading more!

Brilliant!

I'd love to see how this continues.

I like it keep it up! .

great job with establishing an OC keep up the great work i hope to see more soon

Akatsuki's goal, according to the Leader in the latest chapter, is to gather all nine bijuu (tailed beasts), and use their power to become capable of instantly starting and ending any wars whenever they choose.

Because so much of their world's economy is tied into the shinobi villages, and the villages make the most money during wars, by controlling the outcome of wars, they'll control the entire world financially. The Leader basically wants to create a monopoly on war itself, and rule the world through ruthless buisness tatics.

Kinda weird, but that's what the Leader said their goal was, and it's actually pretty clever and subtle. They'll rule the world from the shadows, so no one will ever be able to challenge them directly, because they'll just manipulate whomever is in charge for real, and their puppet governments will take all the blame.

I personaly would like to say that I liked it very with the little kid and Naruto talking as it reminded Naruto as he remiunded him of I also liked

it how you made the converstaion and misson given to Naruto as it sounded like it was you don't mind I would really love it if you could make more for 'Home for demons' as I would love to read alot more. :)

I like this story! I have to agree with you on the whole Sasuke

killing bit . I hate him with a shiny gold plated passion! can't wait for your update!

keep writing !

Love the story update soon!

I love so much! Poor Naruto! Alone for his birthday! And poor Remy! I hope you update soon! .