| Reviews for Apprenticeship |
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Jerichoyuy chapter 1 . 4/5/2019 Apprenticeship. A whole new side of Paulina that does her justice. I picked this up today and already finish all 5 chapters. Sad there isn't any more then that. I really love how this started and I hope there is more to come. Though 9 years is a long time. It may have been abandoned but it's still worth the read. WoM Paulina really still the story! |
WhimsiKitty chapter 5 . 2/12/2019 Hhh, this is so cute and funny! I really like the way you characterized Paulina - still true enough to the canon, while actually giving her some depth and intrigue! The Mrs. Dublin shenanigans are especially funny, and Danny's adorable (of course). Fun read! |
linziefey chapter 5 . 10/10/2017 Aaaah, I just read through this whole story and I am loving it! It's very well written and sweet and I adore the focus on Paulina's character development! You just don't ever see enough of that, like, anywhere. And! There's more Danny than usual in the 5th chapter! That's so great! Love how you write their interaction. I know it's been, like, seven entire years since you updated this last, and I'm just as late to it as I was late to enter the Phandom, but I really love this and I love the pairing so I hope that maybe, someday, there's a chance you'll continue this, because it's adorable. |
pip chapter 5 . 1/6/2017 I love this pairing and I love this fic, it is my FAVORITE danny/paulina fic still! Paulina is such an interesting character, here, with her catching on to ghost science, and her sadness and frustration at not being taken seriously is really effective. I love that half the reason she's sticking with it now is out of spite, haha. I hope someday you an come back to this, it is really really good. |
zela night chapter 5 . 9/2/2016 why is it over, it isn't finished? |
Ignis76 chapter 5 . 8/30/2016 This is so fantastic! XD I love how well Paulina's personality is developing and what's especially admirable is the fact that you haven't changed her core self at all but instead you've given it more depth considering that the canon take on her is that of a shallow popular rich girl (I'm disappointed int that to be honest, such a waste of potential character development) The thing with is a bit disturbing if she's older then Maddie and she's been checking out a teenager for over years since he was fourteen (that's my assumption of his age at least) so even if its portrayed in a humorous light it can still be interpreted as pedophilia...I imagine that when they find out her reason for sticking around, Jack and Maddie will definitely loose it. That aside this is so freaking awesome and I really do hope you'll update soon :D |
dontaskk chapter 5 . 7/14/2016 oh i love this XDD please continue i would love to see more of this fanfic. after all, its not everyday a fanfiction doesnt show Paulina as a Danny Phantom obsessed witch |
Trudyann B chapter 5 . 6/19/2016 You are such a fun writer! Love the depth and development you gave Paulina. I was in hysterics at these specific points: Somewhere in Wisconsin, Vlad got the funny feeling someone was talking about him. The roofes just got a bit singed. You're not hitting anything behind you anymore- that's an improvement! |
AlyssOfTheIsle chapter 5 . 6/16/2016 OMG THIS IS AWESOME! Even if you never write another chapter to this story, I can honestly say it is one of the most original, well written stories I have ever read :) Fantastic job! |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/4/2016 I like what I've read so far. This is actually well-written, and you've added some depth to Paulina without changing her character. I hope you get back to this story sooner or later. |
bruh chapter 5 . 12/31/2015 these story has been paid dust for the past 5 years and i'm really sitting here still hoping for an update bc it's so cute lmao |
1004-Angel chapter 5 . 11/23/2015 Wow, I'm really enjoying it. You're right; Danny/Paulina is a super rare pairing, but I'm liking that you're turning Paulina into a much deeper and emotional character, I'd love to see where this story goes. It's a shame it's been several years since an update, but I'm patient. Update when you can, and when you do, I'll bet my best ecto-gun I'll be one of the first to read it. :) |
Tay1019411 chapter 1 . 10/29/2015 I don't know if I ever commented on any of your stories before, but I had to comment on this one. Besides the interesting plot and the good writing (which are probably what all the other reviews talk about, no doubt), I have to say, what really impressed me was how well you wrote your characters. They are so three dimensional! I love it. A lot of writers, especially with Paulina and dash (although writing for dash is improving) fall into that trap of just writing them a face-value following how they see them in the show which is mostly shallow and petty. But, you wrote Paulina in a way that makes her human and I haven't ever seen her written this way before. I love how you gave her good points in addition to bad points, how she's clever and determined but at the same time can be a bit shallow and only think about herself. This is what ultimately makes good writing, when the characters are relatable and actually humans. I also love what you done with Danny too. You really captured how mature he became in the years that past. Good job! |
SmileWave chapter 5 . 9/22/2015 why are most of the stories not finished? :( |
Guest chapter 5 . 8/22/2015 and another good story bites the dust. |