me: oh, jeez. if that got any sweeter i may have needed an insulin shot... cute, tho. continue.

Please UPDATE soon

o layla and maj r gunna prank the boys mwahahahahahaha girl power

aw i so cnt wait for the proposal

me: AH! you arent gogin to break up will and layla will you? pranking boomer, not a bad idea...

interesting ending for a chapter. I love it. Keep updating!

i really like the plot idea! i cant wait i just have one question: is warren or ethan gonna find a girlfriend?

Interesting, can't wait to see the prank on Boomer;P

o hes gunna propose? aw how sweet omg poor layla i cn jst imagine wat must be goin thru her mind watchng her boyfriend walk away holding onto another girls hand o wills in trouble lol

o i love the prank idea well i dnt kno wat it is bt i like tht they gunna prank coach boomer hehehehe mwahahahahahahahahahahah love it

well i hope u update soon cos i cnt wait to find out mre bowt the prank nd how wills gunna propose

hehe

luff phoenix

hahahaha love it totally love it

please write more soon i cnt wait for the pranking to begin mwahahaha i lvoe pranks theyr so much fun to play on pple mwahaha jst not whn it happns to me bt sumtimes they funni hha im gunna shut up nw :)

Interesting, I look forward to seeing how the prank goes:P

Pretty good. keep it up and try not to summarize things up very quickly in the middle of the story. some people (like me) would probably prefer it if you expained it a bit more. other than that great story!