wow, what a ride...
great Story, thanks for sharing!

Really beautiful!

During the entire time I was reading I kept shouting 'Don can't die! He can't die!'

It's like when you're watching a sport on TV and the team you're rooting for made a bad move and you start shouting at the TV even though you know the players can't hear you.

This story was so great, it made me cry like crazy. I love the entire story, getting to see the closeness between Alan&Don, Don&Charlie and Alan&Charlie.

Also loved the small cameo from the mom. Thanks for sharing this story with us.

The terror and anxiety was very believable in this story. And, I really loved the part where Don was needing to know what his mother said.

Just another very good fic. I like the way you take to permit Alan and Charlie take care of Don.

OMG, what is Don thinking? Go to a doctor!

I really like this story so far. :)

Hahahah! The minivan was the perfect end to this story. I'll have you know you made me cry many a time in the last twelve chapters, and I still loved them all!

My favorite line, though: He glanced over his shoulder as if to make sure the turnoff wasn’t following them. How rational is that? he wondered to himself.

Just like Don to be psycho-analyzing himself : D

Great story, really had me on edge thinking that Don was going to die.

Love the parts when their mother can and visited him.

Wow, this story was really good. It had me crying just before they got rescued when Don saw his mother, it was really sad that part. But it's a great story.

Such a sweet father/son scene.

Eh, dear. Why do I think things are going to get worse before they get better?

I just discovered these fanfiction sites, and in the past few weeks, I've read all your work.( All I could find at least.) I wanted you to know that, this story, as well as all the others is absolutley wonderful. I am truly a fan!

P.S. I agree with all your other admirers... Just how many ways can you hurt Don?

Keep up the wonderful work.

Hm...I always enjoy your stories, but after having spent most of last week doing just what Don's doing, I may need to let the memory get a couple days more distance before I continue...

Wow. Killer start.

Ah! A very satisfying ending to a wonderful story which I originally did not want to read. I've got nothing against whumping Don...Alan...anybody...but I had a hard time picturing Don with an ulcer. What can I say, sue me! No, don't. I have no money. Please...I'm on Social Security Disability. Really.

So I didn't want to read this, but I like your stuff, 3rd gal, so I did. And, sigh...it turned out wonderful. So thank you for sharing it. A great read. Thanks for sharing your talent.