You just made me cry... This is so beautiful...I can't even...

That was beautiful and sad and it made me cry. You have a talent for capturing emotions perfectly. Lovely. Broke my heart.

I have to mention this though, because it is continuous throughout the story, and your other stories, as well. There are repeatedly silly little grammar mistakes that are easily fixable but that you don't seem to be fixing. The big one is how you switch from past to present tense at least once in every line. Try to stay in one tense (I would advise past). There is also a lot of awkward sentence structure, mostly because of lack of commas, and I noticed a few verb-subject agreements that were wrong. Overall, it was very distracting to read.

Other than that though, I admire your writing. Many of your lines are so powerful they tear my heart open.

Oh man! Okay first of all, there's something about how you always refer to her as "she" that I just LOVE more than ANYTHING! It gives it this extra sad... life move on, lesson learned, lean your ear in cause I'm a gonna tell you a secret quality! I LOVE IT And then how Remus just wouldn't take her... *sighs* that'd been awsome if he fell in love with her as a child-probably harder to resist when she got older *shrugs* My favorite thing about the story though it the story telling. How she's refered to as "she" I don't know why, it's just magical. It's tellilng the story of how "SHE" changed, and I love that... wow.. haha wow...

Oh my god that was SO sad! But so beautiful! :]

One word: beautiful.

I don't even know what to say. You're just a completely amazing writer. Your stories are told in this completely new and unique style, and you have these amazing lines that I just love. I've only read about three of your stories, but I'm going to go now and read more. I just wanted to say "Wow" about this story first.

That's absolutely beautiful. It really is, devastatingly beautiful.

that was really well written ... I don't come across many fics about Tonks, so it's different, and cool ...

Aw! *sniff* *sniff* so sad! it kinda reminded me of night sirius...only not quite.

Great job, as usual, Bundi

Poor Tonks. That was beautiful! Great Work.

Live Fast Die Never

Oh.

That's so beautiful! I love all your stories...!

By the way, is this a chapter fic?

wow...

this was there a sequel?

Beautiful.

Yeah, wow. Go re-read the other reviews you've gotten - those are my sentiments as well. Really nice job with the characters, the story, the depth. I liked it a lot.

Wow. This was an amazing-ly well written story with an excellent plotline. I love the backstory and the interspection into NT's life. The ending was magnificently done, and I commend you for not making it a cliche happily-ever-after type thing.

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