That's cute!

"My face still feels tight, where the tears dried. I stopped crying some time ago; I don't remember how long. [...] My mind won't let me forget that I'm alone in here."

This was my favorite passage from the story. I like the entire concept, really. For Raven to hit Beastboy hard enough to draw blood is something we don't ever see. Of course she would be regretful, and it's interesting the way you portrayed her as feeling alone again. As for Beastboy, I'm not sure what his reaction would be, and I'm not sold by your version. But it's a valid take, and the story was nicely written without becoming redundant (which puts you ahead of 90% of Raven-based fanfics).

Sheesh. Girl's got issues.

Scratch that. She's got the whole blasted subscription!

Here's hoping BB has the staying power it will take to stick with her until she can work through it all.

(First-person is occasionally fun to write, just as a change-it-up or an experiment ... or in that odd instance when another viewpoint just won't really work. You did a fine job here.)

Wow that's amazing. I have recently found your stories and have read I think five now. In your announcement you said something about it being weird that you picked a girl as your first point of view wrighting, does that mean your a boy/man? I hope I don't caus offense, but if you are male, I say you understand girls a whole lot better then most.

Great one shot. I liked how it was written from her point of view in thought.

best story I have read without diologe(sp?)

Awe! So fluffy! AH! the cotton candy beasts are coming again! I must pull out and light my sparklers of doom!

Cute short. I like the lack of dialogue. Very good job writing Raven's personality. Keep up the good work, I really liked it.

Oh my god. I'm...flattered that you actually think the way I write is good enough to emulate. Wow. This was amazing and honestly I could see myself trying out a scenario similar to this. Except this is probably more emotional than anything I could ever dream up. I love this one.

AW! KAWII! I love it! it really shows what Raven probably would feel in this sitch. Please write one for BB's outlook!

Wonderful. It is both sweet and realistic. Just what I needed.

aww! thats a cute little fic...

Very impressive. The homage is very accurate. The trick Lamb always seems to pull is packing a lot of things into a short fic. I think she does this by implying a lot, and letting the reader "fill in the blanks," and you caught that very well. Even before you mention the flowers and the vase, we get the sense this is the sort of thing that's happened many times before with these two. Also, there was a great job here in establshing character without dialog, a Lambbaby trademark. Even with subtle differences, it's clear who's style you're paying tribute to, making this a very fun read.

I know for a fact that Lambbaby is a great admirer of your work, and I'm sure she'll be tremendously complimented by this.

wow. you know all i had to do was see the word lambaby and i clicked the link. lambaby is the best for oneshots, which are my favorite of all types of stories, and i think you did pretty well. it was much like the same style,but not copying really. i mean, your own but ...hmm. i do not know the word. but it's good.

i liked the story, no dialouge bit. i like no dialouge. and it was cool that you did a girl's POV for first person. i do all the firs person stuff i write as beast boy and i'm a girl so i hardly see that as wierd.

experiment was definetly a sucess. i should look at this memories written in stone, you are a very good writer so it would be good, right?

by the way, i adore bb/raevn and i think you did well witht their realatinship. it's not really out of character, like, you have no idea why they suddenly jumped up and went 'oh i luv you' ...you know?it was realistic.

Hm... not bad. It's your own style, of course. But again, not bad... you actually did quite well, for an experement.