Apollo helping? Something seems fishy. Personally, I think you could have used more detail. I would have ended it by saying what the prophecy was.

Pretty good chapter. I like how put Chai as a good musician but clueless everywhere else. However, I really don't think it was good to have Percy and Thalia arguing with the girl. Also what about Annabeth?

I must say you are excellent at cliffhangers. Just be careful not to overdo it. Sometimes they can get annoying. I saw two misspelled words. I think its interesting how you put Chiron watching the half-bloods like he was right all along. Why doesn't he help them? Also you mentioned that you finally gave the claymore a name and yet, you do not state it. Also it would have been a bit better to add some parts with Marlin fighting with his claymore so we get a visual of what he is experiancing.

I love the cliffhangers you put in this story. I don't think the name you gave to the army was appropriate for the purpose but it was creative. Also, why doesn't Chiron go along with them?

This is my favorite chapter so far. I absolutely love the twist of Eros running off with Annabeth. I can't wait to see what happens next. My jaw literally dropped. Only concern is that Chiron told Marlin he could not be in the camps activities, yet later on you said Marlin was improving at archery because of his injury.

Really good chapter. You did have a few mistakes though. In the beginning you said Hera's cabin is number 3 and later you said cabin three was Poseidon's cabin.

The story is good so far. You had a few spelling mistakes in the beginning. I like how you put in the joke of Dionysus saying Marlin was named after a fish.

my name is eros :D

um... wow, i liked that a lot actually. can't wait for the next chappie!

I finally got the time to read this fic, and it's excelent!

Ps. I would point out any mistakes but I can't find any.

I have to say it. You are a really good author.

But PLEASE, for the love of god (or gods) chop up those GIGANELEPHENTANIOUS chapters. I almost had a coronary when I saw the one in chapter four.

Anyway, keep up the work.

Wait. Does "Elephantanious" exist...oh who cares?

hehehehe. *Bows to queen of cliffys*

aw

i wish i was as good at cliffies as you.

upd8, please!

:)

ok, one,

PERCYANNABETH FOR EVER! not marlinAnnabeth. Other then that...GREATNESS!

O.O moremoremore... More!