I absolutely LOVE the comparison between flying on those swings to flying through the air after a joust.

It was cute.

That was really good, you could totally expand on this, like one about her "flying" because of a kiss, or a memory of flying in the courtyard of the Yamani Island when she was little and was training with the court ladies

thanks

Ha, ha. This was quite entertaining. I didn't know where you were going with this until the end, but it was still a fun piece. I don't know why there are so few pieces incorporating the jousting - it's really an interesting subject to write about. Keep up the good work.

LOL - very funny!

I like it so far, but why was Kel jumping out of the saddle?

Nice little onshot. I loved the imagery of the swing, very vivid and believable. Good job!

That was really funny, I loved it. You could write a sequel, or turn it into romance, if you wanted to. That would be even cuter, but I like it anyway. Thanks for writing this.

Thais of the Star

Great idea... Well written and I agree about the stuip chain letter (very pleb)

interesting one shot. never would have thought of the idea though.

I wasn't going to review for this story until I went to read the other reviews and saw the peice under this review right now. As a review board, it's actually meant to *review* the story. Save those stupid chain letters for your friends. They might enjoy them. They're not appropriate here.

So, using the board for its true purpose, I thought your story was a good oneshot. You used descriptions well, and the ending was funny. That matter of fact reaction seemed alot like Kel. Nice job.