*I* *LOVED* *IT* *TO* *DEATH* ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
I Wonder If Dark And Malon's Kid's Will Have Black Hair Or Red Hair ?
That Said, You're 150/5 Stars ;)
By The Way, *I'M* *DYING* *TO* *READ* *THE* *SEQUEL* ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Why is Dark Link so weak, it's ridiculous!

You know something, the shadow could (although it is a cliche) be a part of his soul that stayed with her in the end I liked the ending where they married better.

Honestly, I am not sure if someone has already told you, but the story seems a bit rushed. Other than that though, it was a good story. I find that I myself and other people lately have been rushing their stories. Wonder if its an epidemic lol.

Actualy, Darks death was just an extra so that means that you can make a sequel to the good ending. Don't keep your fans waiting!

Doesn't everyone hate Navi? What would you chose: A cave with bones on the ground and a sign saying "Warning,Dragon" or a lovely springtime meadow with a sign saying "Hey! Listen!"?

okay so first of I would like to say

OH MY GOD!

I have never met anyone before who sopported Dark Link and Malon I was litaraly hyprovenalateing as I read I loved how you made Dark so well he was almost as I imagined him AH I am still so pumped from reading it it was so good I loved it

it make me want to type mine up and put it on here

Good Job

:highfive:

I am still so excited that someone shares my passion for Dark Link and Malon

Okay I'm reviewing but in exchange you should go review my story. It's called A Shadow's Fire. it's Dark link X Malon, but... it is definitely not as cool as yours. Keep writing!

Actually, I really hated that alternate ending

aww, that's so cute!

awesome ending

Just as good as the other ending, but I still like the other one better. I blame my fun-lovingness.

*Slowly starts clapping*

Bravo, good ending. Perhaps it's just because I've grown attached to the characters, but I liked it, despite it having a few spelling/grammer errors.

That's really good! I love it!

normally i read everything about dark link, but i dont have time at the moment, ill read the rest later, ive read the first bit, a bit of the middle & the end but as far as i can tell it's pretty damned good...well chop chop, plenty more fan fics 2 rate ta ta!

So it's over now...*cries* seriously, that was good, and sweet, and... my e-mail adress should be below my name, unless you want to maybe put alink or something on your page so others can see? and I don't suppose we'll be getting a sequel? oh well. was beautiful while it lasted!