I really hope this story eventually updates.

Fascinating direction for the story, and a nice continuation of what came before. If you ever pick up this again, it would be great. But time changes all of our priorities, of course.

You should have named Roger Dan as he is referred in most stories about the Grangers. His wife was Emma.

Too bad another fine story lies unfinished and dying.
Too bad we will never see Harry and Hermione go on their first date.
Too bad we will never know the power that allows both Harry and Voldemort to survive the killing curse.
But mostly of all, we will never know the true identity of ms. Aedernams.
It's always sad to find a well thought out story that has foundered and this one needs to be laid to rest.

Omg I wish this story was completed :(

I hate this story because it spoils me with the quality of dialogue you have in it and I don't think I'll ever find any other story that will be near as good!

omg you are the most talented writer I've ever seen and without question the best portrayals of HP as well. The dialogue is so brilliant and their mannerisms and such, its just so perfect, I wish you'd have written more of H/Hr, yours are so sweet and real :[

I too, like many others, would like to see you finish this story if you could please :-)

Harry and Hermione better start using killing curses soon as the story is killing me every time I hear them use a stunner. How can he lead in battle when he fights like a kid.

Having seen your recent activity for 'Etched', finishing off that story - nice to know you're still writing? - I'm going to cross my fingers and hope that you might have something coming for this tale. Or even a final chapter or epilogue to give it some closure, even if you don't have the time for the material in between. I'd love to witness that 'first date' between Harry and Hermione - if they ever get to finally have it! - or otherwise know that they ended up happily ever after in your world.

Anyway, thank you again for this story and 'With Malice Aforethought', truly wonderful novels in the HP universe which I've read several times. Your writing worked so well. Merry Christmas!

completely excellent story please continue it

Hi. I guess you've abandoned writing fan fiction, or this wonderful story. :(

Might I ask ... if you have any drafts of any further chapters, or maybe a few future scenes - a first date springs to mind! ... would you consider posting them? I regularly re-read both your HP novels, they really are excellent, and it would be nice to have some new bits or "this is how it was going to end" hints to give some closure. It would be great if you could so this.

Otherwise I hope you're having a great life, and I sincerely thank you for what you did write; extremely satisfying reading.

Still no first date. :(

Why haven't you finished this story? Or have you posted it on another site? Please answer.

It is insupportably cruel of you to abandon the story at this point. You've written a great start to the 7th year and I truly hope there is more to come. This fic looks darker and more political than the last but has huge swaths of action to make up for it. Please, please, please keep writing!

You've got a good story going here; it's a shame that it hasn't been updated in years. If you ever do come back to it, I'll be here to read. Thanks for writing!