Nice!

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A nice heartwarming story about how Byakuya felt when he first saw Rukia, such strong resemblance to his late wife Hisana.

I especially love this part you wrote at the end of this fanfic,

"I'll leave my heart with you, Byakuya-sama, the safest place of all."

I feel for both Byakuya and Hisana when they were going to get separated for good.

Keep on writing when you are free! :D

Beautifully written. I really enjoyed reading it. Kudos to you!

This is so sweet. A gem of a ficlet!

Nela

This story is wonderful. Loved it.

Absolutely beautiful. I truly loved this. You got inside Byakuya's head and made a masterpiece. Well done.

Sora

i think there is smothness in your story, a softness and a coldness that let us see Byakuya as he is

good job!

Oh my goodness!That actually made me cry a little bit at the done!

Pretty but sad!

You just took my perception of the cold bastard otherwise known as Byakuya, and shattered all previous dispositions about him with this story. Most awesome :D

Do you have any recommendations for fanfics that are as awesome as this one?

Realistic and sweet all at the same time!

One of the most poignant pairings, to me, is ByakuyaxHisana. Loved this very much.

Pretty and simple. It perfectly covered the Kuchiki-sibling dynamic, and the whole thing was very well-written. I liked the imagery of Rukia being lost, and of Renji as a loyal hound. I enjoyed the whole piece very much. Great job.

*inhales*

Pretty. :3