that was fun!

Such a fun story. Even though I was 99% sure I knew who Calus was from the beginning, there was still a niggling doubt in the back of my mind that kept me on my toes. Sweet ending too, loved the touch with Caleb!

Dear author,
Such a delightful story, and I have favourited it. So funny.
I enjoyed your wit, and severe sarcasm. Do, please write more.
Forgive me, but these little 'wrong grammar fish' slipped through the net. and made me drop the thread of your story, because I was puzzled and baffled.

Chap 8: Not ' McG. was angering,' - but 'McG. was slowly becoming angry.' anger is a noun, not a verb, therefore it doesn't have tenses.
Chap. 10: Not ' G. sighed in empowerment...,' but ' G. sighed, giving up.' Empowerment stands for the exact opposite
Chap 11: Not ' swollen silence' ..., but ' pregnant silence', i.e. full of unspoken meaning.
PS. Oxford Advanced Learner's Dictionary is just the thing to peek into, for new ideas to spring on us innocent readers.

this was a cute fun story, it made me giggle!

Loved it.

good interesting story, I really liked it, but after the last chapter I felt that there could be more about their relationship, at least another two chapters...

That was legendary! It was gripping, funny, and kept me in suspense nearly the whole through, even though even from chapter 1 I knew Snape was Calus. Basically, it was awesome!

Wonderful Story! I love your writing style, and your sense of humor. The twist with Lola was great too. And I loved your Snape, and that brief interlude with poor McGonagall.

Keep it up~!

I absolutely loved it! I'm beyond words! You're such a witty, talented humorous -erm- girl?:D Thanks for sharing it with us, it was a great pleasure; it was a long time I last read such an entertaining story.

Well done!

Very humourous and well written. Greatly enjoyed it!

I didn't expect Lola to be able to keep a secret. Thanks for sharing this amusing tale with us.

Yay! we ge to see Minerva! I love Professor McGonagall and think we need more of her in fan fictions. I love Snape teasing Minerva.

I love your disclaimer in rhyme at the beginning of this chapter, very fun and funny. I enjoyed the chapter as well, make no mistake!

I wondered if Caleb was Snape polyjuice, but she saw him fairly often and Snape could't be spending that much time at the Prophet. and then there were the two of them together, which put paid to that theory.

This is very amusing!

I thoroughly enjoyed your story; it was a very entertaining and highly amusing read. :) Nicely done, keep on writing!