About 1. Why would that necessarily be the case? Does he automatically have to take his dad's last name? Is there any material backing up this assumption?

Drinking shouldn't have a legal age mainly because people shouldn't freaking drink because most can't drink responsibly. If alcoholic beverages didn't exist humanity would be so much better off. Also there do happen to be places on planet Earth where you can drink as early as 16 you could've just had your story set in a fictional place that falls under said laws.

I loved this story. It was funny and sweet and angsty and lots of fun to read. Thank you!

Wow, Riku should be a judge. I'd love to see those fines done.

I started laughing when Axel yelled Zexion upon seeing him. Actually, I loved that entire scene.

Leon and Cloud are pricless when high (they sre high, right?).

Love the story, it dosen't show that love is f*cking pink roses (pardon my language, you know what i dont freaking care) in all can't wait for the sequel, if you made one.

Not the kind of character I ever imagined Sora as (he's...kind of a prick) but a hilariously amazing story nonetheless. Can't wait to continue!

OMG I know I'm years late on finding this hidden gem of pure bliss but I humbly through myself at your feet and offer any amount of blood you desire my queen of all angsty goodness and nail biting suspense! But on a more serious note I couldn't stop reading this story and it has quickly wormed it's way into my heart as one of my favorites of all time (right up there with salicity by brunette s angel) and I'm loving your depiction of the characters I think you may have made me into a Zexy-Demmy fan with this -insert overly dramatic fall to the ground and clutching at heart- The only bit of critic I have to offer -kicks own ass for next comment- the ending felt kinda rushed but I'm not complaining! -offers cyber cookie as peace treaty- Just keep up the good work -leaves now to read every other thing you have ever written-

Usually I like my stories to have descriptive sex scenes, but this story... It just enthralled me from the beginning. I got quite a many stares from my roommate due to the laughter that this fic ensued. I enjoyed this a lot.

You're good at gripping the reader, and I really enjoy your writing. :)

This is really great thus far. I really adore your writing style - it's wonderful.

What does BGM mean though? My brain isn't processing it.

Ahh I love your characterization it's so unique, and I literally doubled over laughing more than once because this was just freaking funny! Loved it loved it 3

Wow.

I read that whole thing in, like, two days. Two days, and Cloud/Leon has moved above Xaldin/Luxord on my mental yaoi pairings list. xD ((Akuroku and Sora/Riku are still first and second, respectively, though ;))

In short, you managed to bundle most of my favorite Kingdom Hearts pairings into one big angsty, hilarious, AMAZING *noms caps* story that totally had me on the edge of my...couch (not really a seat).

That last part, about Marxion dubcon hate-sex, I am seriously considering writing that for you, but A) I'm not sure if I'd be any good writing lemon, and B) it feels like a really crappy way to lose my Fanfiction virginity. (Really did just say that.) So far I've been way too lazy to post the story I'm writing, but maybe after I do, I could send you your Marxion present.

...Or, Marluxia/Zexion/Demyx threesome. :3

At the end, I was just like "...It's over...It's really over...Sweet Lord, it's over! DDDDDDX...Now I actually have to finish my summer reading, dammit! DX"

Awww! I really enjoyed this story, especially all the various points of view you used throughout the whole thing. Super-adorable! Although I never really saw Marlexion before, now I think it's kinda hot. _

While I feel like there were a few characters that were mildly out of character the whole time (ie, Sora, Namine), you did a good job of keeping them consistent with their changed personalities. Overall, a really cute story. _

Unf . This was amazing