There isn't a chance for more chapters, or?

Hey is there more?

Your not the only one! I find Stockholm syndrome fascinating to but thats just my inner psychologist getting excited! :P Great story by the way!

i liked it

Very interesting...can't wait to see how this plays out!

BlackRose

Oh that was gorgeous. I believe you just gave me the inspiration to practice piano again.

Thank you for that and sharing your story with us

Perverted, crass, crude, sometimes cruel, but he's still got a heart in there. Beating or not.

In short: I loved it. In the long: Its nice to see another side of a BJ and Lyds story that doesn't need them ending up sleeping together..although I love those too.

Sheesh, Lydia, let's not nominate the guy for sainthood just yet. He may be nicer than a giant worm that wants to eat you alive, but so are many bad husbands (even ones who blackmailed their wives into doing the deed). Well, she'll probably shake it off next time he forgets to change her water dish.

I wonder how she'll pass the time in that place, anyway? Being trapped in a Tim Burton style environment would likely inspire some pretty Kafka-esque musings before long. Maybe she'll take up writing.

I also wonder how her parents are doing... since time passes so much faster in the "Neitherworld," from their perspective it's probably been at least a few years since they lost Lydia. Yeesh... wonder what they did with her room?

Joking aside, this is a fun, sweet, creative story that I'd like to see continued sometime. Or at least brought to a conclusion. Too many fine stories around here are left undone.

Kind of like ghosts, I guess.

wow this is getting good _

lol good joke! and i like it so far.

up date up date Please ! this is just getting good. So much needs to happen more love more sarrow more more I don't know, in my mind I see them falling in love and her helping him get all his powers back but it comes as a price and she die's or is close to dieing or better yet is being holed of to heaven and Beej is freaking out and trying to hold on to her and shows off his cool ass powers in a mine blowing don't f with the b man way.

Love it please update i need to read the next

i love the unusual sweet ending, it isnt super mushy but much more realistic

i loved it!