Took you long enough to make Sasuke fight back. But I still don't like it that you made them SO weak.. And Sasuke being tied easily and nearly rape by Orochimaru. I can't imagine that Sasuke allowed that to go far.

I guess you enjoy making Sasuke, Sakura and now Kakashi WEAK! You made Orochimaru overpower them. I can't take this! And what about the promise Sasuke said that He'll protect Sakura? How can he when Sasuke himself need protection from that Snake Bastard. And Sasuke always changing the topic or hiding something.

So gross! This is crazy..Sasuke isn't a virgin and the worst is that creepy snake bastard took it! Any more revelation? I can't help being totally disgusted by this. Sorry for the words but that's how I view it. And the scenes of SasuSaku it was lacking something. Especially on Sasuke's part. If I hadn't known I'd think he is like...forced to be with Sakura. But I dont wanna think about it. I hope there's progress in the next

I hate this. You made Sasuke so weak. Like letting Orochimaru touch him and molest him! Wtf! How gross. And the worst part is he's not doing anything against it. And also Sakura she's stupid really. What's wrong with them?!
It's plain stupid anyone can tell.

Noo it done ;/

soy sauce scent?! gross.

Sakura want to get raped by Orochimaru haa

OROCHIMARU GOT CAUGHT HAA

Rekt

"YOU FAT BITCH" HAA

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA OROCHIMARU I DONE XD

Orochimaru is a pedophile

HAAA INO GOT REKT

Oh no

I think this fanfic gave me anorexia...