who are the corbins? do you perhaps mean the leobans model 2

I’m completely blown away by this entire story. It was so much better than how they ended the show and opens up so much in terms of future stories.

The writing method and storyline were top notch and I look forward to reading more from the author.

Thanks for a fantastic read!

Spike

Wow. Took me quite a while to read the whole thing, but I'm impressed. While it needs an editor, the story itself is fantastic.

Hope your muses want to write what happens next, because I want to see the Original John get his just deserts.

Thanks for writing this!

It was a good read, now I am satisfied with this ending. The serie's original ending was shit honestly, this story is much better.

And here I will stop reading this story.
It was great nad I liked it very much. But, please dear Sidhe, why the frack did you not even bother to look into sources like wikipedia?
I never finished the show, but even I could roughly tell the story of the final five.
To be honest, to my mind you have not only failed to write fanfiction, you did not even try.

I love the Freedom of Speech bit in this chapter. It is especially welcome in a time when free speech itself is under attack. I may not agree with what you say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it.

The greatest irony of the Inquisition being intimidating for historical reasons is that, historically, the Inquisition pioneered humans treatment of prisoners and chastised governments for their overuse of torture and overly harsh punishments. Many Inquisitors even decried torture as a sin. The Inquisition was blames by Hollywood for the tortures and executions committed by governments. An extreme irony, if ever there was one.

Loved this story and hope there is a follow up set in the colonies someday.

Andrei chapter 1 . Sep 2, 2018
Utter and complete shyte that insults the series in a disgusting way.

How can you insult the series when it was basically crap to begin with?

In a lot of ways it was worse than Galactica 1980, even though 99% of the charcters would have fit into that series with little or no problems..

The imperium doesn't feel like a human civilization which is at war “for survival” for the last 1000 years, more like a weird hippie exercise…

which does mean the raptors don't feel like a threat.

Utter and complete shyte that insults the series in a disgusting way.

By Cthulhu's tentacles, it has been a while since i read something worse than this - an utter and complete cringefest of epic proportions.
I effectively can't say anything good about it apart the fact that it has almost no misspellings. Absolutely everything else is atrociously bad: the plot, the charcters, even the descriptions.

Amazing story! I liked that the Colonial behaved more rational and less dogmatic.

I Noticed some... misinformation about chapter 16... like to note that the dead sea scrolls prove that Christian text have been Accurate even throughout the test of time and only changes were grammar and language related... I... See a lot of muslim favoritism... i hope i am wrong... but...

This is one of the best storylines that I have read that deals with BSG universe.