It's pretty well written :) I just have one question: "Is her baby Tony's or not?" Have a nice day!

Don't understand what the point of this story was.

UPDATE SOON, i loved it

Bree xoxo

I'm crying

God.. This chapter was absolutely amazing! Very well written! :)

I liked it, very very much, but I'm a bit confused as to who the last tryst was with; was it Tony or ... Mysterious Man.

Was this set during season 7/8? The talk of suicide missions (etc.) gave it that kind of feel, and then I began to wonder if the man she won't talk about with Tony was "Dearest R" that she (in the episodes) wouldn't tell Tony about.

Which reminds me, why haven't we met him yet? Maybe this week...

Anyway, fantastic story. Very angsty. Just what I needed.

I love the irony that..your name is Jeanne...and his girlfriend was Jeanne...I got confused at the end when you signed your 'name'. I thought..for a moment..it was Jeanne from the series.

Now, onto a more serious matter-your fic. Amazing. Kept my interest from the beginning. Onto chapter two! Looove it.

It's a great chapter. I Need to have the rest of the story !

See you soon

That actually hurt in a way that's very hard to describe... but it was well done. I'm adding it to my alert list because here's for hoping that there might be more to come

AMAZING chapter! can't wait to find out whats gonna happen next!

please update soon!

I loved this story, although it's horribly dark and stuff. I couldn't tell which character said "I never loved you the way you love me." I thought it was Tony, but I'm not sure.

good chapter, cant wait to see what come next ;)

I'm just a little confused- who says "I never loved you the way you loved me" Tony or Ziva?

Lovin' it!

Well, if I HAD to nitpick, the only thing I could find would be Ziva's use of contractions. On the other hand, as good as that was, who's gonna nitpick? Very nicely done, A!