Honestly, this was a glorioys story.. In the end slagar was faced with wot so many had felt in his presence...however as we all know he of course was evil...and some may even say heartless and unredeemable... but from reading both the book and watching the animation/show my heart honestly goes out to him... I feel that he under all his cruelty and loathing and need for revenge he truly was misunderstood... and he never really got a chance to explain himself...i truly feel he lived his life full of regrets, sorrow's, and pain... by far slagar is my most favorite character in the redwall universe... I honestly sympathised with him a lot especially when he talks of revenge in the animation.. because you can hear (at least this is how i felt about it) the pain.. or for lack of better terminology hurt in his voice... hells he lost his mother as a kit... sure he and sela were double dealers of information... but just i dunno it sucks... in my heart he'll always be my most beloved villian I was honestly heartbroken by how he perished the entire book/ and animation I was hoping he'd get away or would be redeemed...

A fitting end to Slagar! The final paragraph is heartwarming.

And Slagar had conned other bands of slavers, hadn't he? I suppose they would also want a piece of him.

Excellent!

Tho was an awsome story infancy I think it's horrible.!

I liked this, alot. I almost felt sorry for Slagar, despite the fact that he murdered some of my favorite characters...Hairbelly and Wedgeback.

Very well written. I thought you dealt with the Dark Forest very well, and I was really rather chilled by the end when all the other slavers appeared, seeking vengeance. I'd imagine that it was rather hard to write, but I think you've pulled it off very well, and done a brilliant piece of writing :)

Scary, but very good!

I thought it was pretty good, but the whole thing where they vanished/appeared in a cloud of smoke was a little... old. Perhaps if they faded into shadows it could have been better, but I still liked it.

If you had decided to make this into a multi-chapter fanfiction, I'd have encouraged you to do so, just to let you know.

Keep up the awesomeness!

~Zealak Silverdirk

Nice, very nice. _ You gave that smarmy wanker the torment that he richly deserved.

Another! Another! Another chapter, please! It's good! It's good! Got to stop saying things in exclamation marks and threes! Not intentional rhyme!

This is surpisingly good, Dandylions, so don't fret and no, I won't flame you. You captured Slagar "Chickenhound" so perfectly, up to his disgusting attitude. There's the occasional spelling error and miswording in this story, but it's no big deal, really. I mean, wow, just wow. At least he got what he deserved from the ones that he killed.

~Snuffie

Pretty good one shot! I like how you imcorporated those names at the end eh, with a physical thing and than a body part? Heh.

Overall good. All good description, dialouge, and consistansy. Everybeast there seemed like the way they would act. Ecpecially Slagar.

Hope to see some more of your writing!