It's an excellent story, you hush! I really liked that they fought, oddly enough. It felt more real to me than if they'd just been their sweet, sappy selves that most puzzleshippers seem to go for.

This wasn't awful! Quite the opposite :) It's brilliant!

This was really great and sweet!

Oh, please do. This was a refreshing change of pace from the typical stories.

Oh my goodness. This story was beautiful ;_; I loved every word. It's just... Yum. Its like dark chocolate. I could read it over and over again :) Perfect. And I don't even know why :L

Awww this was great :D awesome story!

I appreciate that this was fluffy without being completely unrealistic lol. Your self-deprecation at the end is totally undeserved

Never stop writing and it was not a horrible story. I enjoyed it )

This was not a terrible story. It was wonderfully written! It's perfect pacing and wording. One can really get a sense of the flow of their hectic lives without even going into too much detail. I'm going through a very similar situation with my partner right now, and this story was comforting in a way. It's very realistic, and you really pay attention to detail, when it comes to their expressions and body language. Great work! I really enjoyed it, and thanks!

It was not awful, I really enjoyed the raw emotions in it.

Good job. :]

this was not an awful story, stop fishing for review ;P

though i do have to say that the rating is probably a bit too high.

I must disagree with your final comment on this story, as well as the opening one. This story was very good in my opinion and the ending was wonderful. I like stories like this and I wish you could see it through my eyes because to me it was a wonderful story. : )

I thought it was cute and adorable and you should be proud of it.

I really enjoyed reading this - it definitely WASN'T horrible.

cute and lol at the thought of Grandpabeachesbikinis lol