awww... kawaii

Darn it. Its to short. I want more. Its just too hot to end it here.

Poor little viper. But I guess it makes the story mroe interesting to torutre him XD I really like that part where he's trying to greet Inui, but only ends up hissing instead xD That was so cute~ And damn, this entire story was super, super cute and that voice in Kaidoh's head is a genius :)

Hm, I never noticed that about Inui's name. Kitty Haidoh and Puppy Inui? Maybe? I LOL-ed at the mention of the 'disturbing animal fetish' though XD This was really sweet, though I love how you wrote them so oblivious to each other. Even though Kaidoh was just short 1 letter/sound of Inui's name, he still manages to deny that Kaidoh likes him. Defiantly faving ~~

"Of course, he had never really been known for his overwhelming normalcy..." :D

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Naughty Inui XD

Nice story _

Aww... Poor poor Kaidoh. Good thing Inui is there for him. He's not totally unloved. _;; There's going to be a next chapter, right? I can't wait to read it! Keep going~ You're doing great!

Chance of the real me liking you as more than a friend: one-hundred percent.

lol. Cool story.

I read the first chapter of this and loved it. The second was a very decent conclusion, and stuck to the same feelings and tones well.

Love the work that you do.

I really enjoyed this. It's a nice mix of cute, sad, hot, and crack. XD I like they way you portrayed both Kaidoh's self-loathing and also how he does his best to keep his promise.

OMG I NEED MORE!;-; Poor Kaidoh thinking so badly of himself...*glomps him* i love my mamushi ;0; can't wait for more ;3

Aw! So0o cute XP

*giggles* cuteness.

yay! i really like this fic. it's very good. kaidoh and inui are my fav seishun characters so thanks for writing!