| Reviews for Naruto: Yondaime's Heir |
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Monster King chapter 6 . 11/15/2018 Great work good job |
my 2 guys chapter 6 . 8/8/2018 that was good keep the chapters coming |
SquadKonohamaru chapter 6 . 3/31/2018 SQUEEEEEEE |
my 2 guys chapter 6 . 9/17/2017 that was good keep the chapters coming |
magicofantasy chapter 6 . 11/26/2015 Beautiful, you writing is good and simple ..The story is not to short and too long ether ,the way I like it ...and Naruhina is the best couple ever ... |
The Animanga Girl chapter 3 . 7/25/2015 I panic for Naruto's head o.o |
The Animanga Girl chapter 2 . 7/25/2015 Fear Hinata's glare XD |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/31/2014 I Dont kow what happen here at the end. But giving that you say "their clothes were discarded as they lay together" am guessing they did it, so I dont get why hinata is blushing at narutos expose body when she already saw more then that. Logically she wouldnT blush or stutter after having intimacy with naruto. Not to mention that giving their prior timidness to their touch, I doubt they would have done it. |
wesleycharles chapter 6 . 4/27/2013 Super sweet NaruHina story...I loved it...and the moral was fitting for Naruto and Hinata...and all of us NaruHina fans that have waited soooo long. I hope Kishi can come up with at least a little of what you have here:) |
wesleycharles chapter 5 . 4/27/2013 Sooo wonderful the way it all came together. Great writing. |
wesleycharles chapter 4 . 4/27/2013 It's all coming together now! Fun story and chpt..I think everyone will end up happy here! :) |
wesleycharles chapter 3 . 4/27/2013 Some really good twists here. Hiashi isn't so bad in your story...and Naruto is close to finding out about his father. Hinata spoke up finally. |
wesleycharles chapter 2 . 4/27/2013 Very sweet chapter...maybe after the Shinobe war is over in the manga...something like this will happen for Naruto and Hinata? We can dream. Love the chapter. |
wesleycharles chapter 1 . 4/27/2013 I like the first chapter. Naruto is training Hinata and they are getting a lot more than new jutsu out of it:) Fun story! |
Godschildtweety chapter 6 . 3/23/2013 Really good |