Loved it. I think you captured the secret thoughts of many of us who write Logan stories. Great job.

Wow! I need a shower,glass of wine and some sleep, what a imagination and is the next chapter?!

Absolutely mint!

Love it. All I can say. I wish it were me with Logan.

Whew... hot, hot, hot. Logan's comments while they're tangling are so perfect. You have them doing things I have never read before. Wow...this is great.

:) wow... Just wow... Me likey

Very well done!

You really managed to capture Ororo's personality in this and the effect that Logan would have on her calm reserved demeanor. Writing from the first person has always been a challenge for me because I get caught trying to balance revealing too much and not revealing enough, but you maintain the line very tightly here.

It's funny that most of us Ro/Lo lovers prefer Hugh Jackman's version to the comics version. He seems to have more substance in the movies, although recent writers have finally decided to make him more than a snarling killer with permanent amnesia.

I look forward to checking out Inextricable Links next!

ummmmm... yeah. wow. LOL! What does it say about me that I picked this one to read 1st? I love it. So glad I've found you :) Gotta go read more :D

This is a rarity... intelligent smut. I love your wording, your believable characterization. This is a lovely little diddy you've written and I thank you for posting it. Please continue to write more. You're very talented.

Love how you describe the whole process with all those well-suited descriptions which I've never seen other authors doing it before!

Ohhh yes very nice story...;)

Absolutely loved it! It was perfect!

This is really good! I hope u write more like this!

Has someone just turned up the temperature in here? That was HOT! And I just love the closing exhanges with Scott - hahahaha! I like this. A lot. x

Really hot.