| Reviews for Fox Among the Leaves |
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Blitzstrahl chapter 6 . 6/23/2018 So if Naruto is the reincarnation of Kurama, then why does he have the surname of Uzumaki? Since he wasn't born from Kushina, and Minato does Kushina even exist? Did Obito just find Kurama hibernating or something? |
Mystearica 'Primal' Fende chapter 6 . 8/25/2017 Thia. This is the one fic that I've been searching and needing for my entire LIFE! Naruto actually being the Kyuubi! (I probably was influenced by the fanfic with Rin actually being Satan but wutevah) An idea I absolutely LOVE! And the writing style is good too! Keep it up, I'm hoping for more chapters! Good luck! |
soul of the kitsune chapter 6 . 8/16/2016 this is really good. please update! |
Primus2021 chapter 1 . 8/31/2014 NaruHina / KyuHina Please! |
SpareTheInsane chapter 6 . 4/12/2014 Please continue. |
SaucyHandles chapter 6 . 2/26/2014 Great story! Keep writing. My only critisism in my opinion is it kinda seems to be straying a bit too far from canon, just with that last chapter starting to feel less like a naruto story and more just some story that's using names from Naruto. In my opinion it just started to lose apeal with their sudden super training and followed by that last mission. -SH- |
crb819 chapter 6 . 1/15/2014 i like it when is the next one be out |
Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 10/28/2012 this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue! |
randomgener chapter 6 . 7/24/2012 i LOOOOOVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEE your story i cant wait for you to update i know that lifes a bitch but i love this story and think of your fans you are such a good writer BYE P.S. UPDATE |
Vein's Simply Tired chapter 6 . 4/3/2012 I particularly love the last part . "I'm not sure about that. He asked us to make a team of skilled heavy combat experts." "Perhaps." "And what else could they be?" "Killers." lol what a lovely way yo end a fic xD thx for making this story _ I hope one day you would find the heart (or time) to continue this :) ,Vein |
Anonymous Reviewer chapter 1 . 12/31/2011 your story is incredible! I love the twist you give this chapter and the twist you put on the naruto universe |
selwynn chapter 6 . 12/17/2011 This story is great, but a lot of small errors (mostly grammatically) that are happening quite frequently is taking away a lot from the story. Those can be easily remedied by a beta reader, a spellchecker, even a simple read over. Your idea is very original and I hope to see more from you. Another thing I like is the whole team 7 dynamics. Sakura is finally useful, Sasuke isn't an absolute douche bag all the time and Naruto is more mature from the ignorant dumbass he used to be. I'll be on the lookout for you so update (but keep it quality!)! ~Ciao~ |
sionnachsSkulk chapter 1 . 12/11/2011 I really like the basis of this story, and I can tell it's going to be interesting, but please get a beta! I'm sorry, but I hate to see such an awesome idea get mauled by bad grammar and syntax. I really don't mean to be offensive, but I am anyway, so I hope you can forgive me. Or at least get mad enough to double check for discrepancies between "their" and "there." |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/13/2011 An interesting concept, but you have some serious problems with homophones. They're almost painful, really. |