| Reviews for The Wedding Night |
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   fandomgirl1412 chapter 1 . 4/10/2016 it's getting hot in here, so take off all your clothes |
| heidipoo chapter 2 . 2/13/2015 Awww. |
| heidipoo chapter 1 . 2/13/2015 Loved it. |
| justified-cord chapter 2 . 7/23/2004 this was really beautiful! I LUV IT Keep up the great work! |
| gummyvites chapter 2 . 8/19/2003 Granted.. yes.. I know.. this is an old OLD story... but I'm new to FF, so I'm catching up. Your story was good... but there were some MAJOR flaws that I thought you might want to know. a) Chapter 2 is definetly rated R.. no questions asked. b) In Ch 2, when Rick is undressing himself.. you say "his pants," or "his shirt" which makes it sound like it's a three-some with Rick and some other guy. That's gross. If you can fix that.. I would. I like the story though. Honestly, I don't know if I would picture their wedding night like that... but it is very probable. |
| charon19 chapter 1 . 2/16/2002 i love this story! it's soooooooo sweet, and perfectly written. kudos, and write more of them. |
| Kels chapter 1 . 2/1/2002 Yeah, Yeah...I'm too lazy to sign in. Anyway! Great story! I can so see Rick acting like that, and Evie too! Keep writing! |
| Aria chapter 2 . 9/3/2001 I really enjoyed this story! I like the fact that you wrote it from both pov's. Wonderful! |
| Bumblebee-Queen chapter 2 . 8/22/2001 How sweet! You did an excellent job with this fic. It was amusing and well-written, and very tasteful. Good for you! |
| Sarah chapter 2 . 8/4/2001 wheeeew! now that ruled. damn, i need a few minutes to cool down. damn. now that was really hot and steamy let me tell u. u better keep up the good work! did i say damn yet, well, damn. peace out |
| Jessica chapter 2 . 7/22/2001 U made Rick so like a pervert! I objective 2 that! :( |
| NileQT87 chapter 2 . 7/15/2001 telling from the way evie acted about making love in the mummy returns, go ahead! tell the nity grity details from her prospective! not many people would say in front of everyone, "do you want to know what heaven looks like"! write more...damn im such a sucker for rick and evie romance! rick aka brendan is very hot by the way! |
| sleepingsnorlax chapter 2 . 6/23/2001 Finally it's up! Great job man, definitely more detailed than Evie's version. Good! |
| Sierra Rose chapter 1 . 6/22/2001 Beautiful, you are really one of my favorite authors. |
| JessC chapter 1 . 6/22/2001 Brilliant! Im glad that you did Ricks POV! Keep writing your very talented! |
