| Reviews for Betrayed |
|---|
  Aza chapter 21 . 3/15/2019 i love all of your chapters. U have inspired me to start writing myself! |
| Aza chapter 17 . 3/15/2019 It was amazing! but... I kind of wish that you would call leader and leader's partner konan and pain. PLEASE! |
 jhian casey chapter 30 . 10/11/2015 well, the last few lines got me.. anyway, nice story.. i love itasaku whether non-mass or mass so, i definitely love this one!;) thank you and more pls!;) |
| Angelkitty24 chapter 30 . 7/23/2015 What? No! Itachi! Deidara! Tobi! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO GO?! Dammit, author, you made me cry! NOOOOO! SO DAMN SAD! WAHHHHHH |
| whatnameshallitake chapter 30 . 3/13/2015 GOSH!Best ItaSaku story I've read so far |
| Yotequiero chapter 30 . 1/17/2015 I loved it it was amazingly written huge props with all my heart refinery one of the best stories on here |
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/20/2014 Being a very critical reader, by now I can tell how much of a weeaboo you are. You rushed things instead of taking a steady timing with descriptive writing, you use japanese words to replace english often, you exaggerate a tad too much but other than that, great grammar and spelling skill :) I feel like you could have done a lot better, take your time to write (not like moi of course) no one's rushing you but since it's completed, maybe come back and rewrite things? This can be applied to every fanfic you'll ever write so good luck! |
| kiko280 chapter 30 . 11/19/2013 Aww kinda sad in. This chap |
| kiko280 chapter 27 . 11/18/2013 Lol I wonder how mad Sakura is gonna b when she arrives at the base! I wonder if hinata is going to faint cos she can't believe it actually happened! |
| kiko280 chapter 23 . 11/18/2013 I think Sakura took sachi his blow |
| kiko280 chapter 10 . 11/18/2013 Lol walking into the tree twice! |
| kiko280 chapter 4 . 11/17/2013 Lol deidara! |
| BoomPowMina chapter 30 . 7/18/2013 I cried like a baby... their deaths were so sad... stung by a bee... DDD': What also got me was the words of the dead...dammit my teddy bear is soaked with my tears (love ya Wally) The story was AMAZING! It lacked description of places, but other than that, i LOVED IT! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR POSTING IT, AND STAY AWESOME! :D |
| BoomPowMina chapter 29 . 7/18/2013 SASUKEEEEE YOU MADE ME CRY AGAIN! WHEN HE SAID THAT HE LOVES HER, I COMPLETLY BROKE DOWN CRYING! DAMMIT BASTARD, GET YOUR ICE CUBE ASS BACK TO KONOHA! |
| BoomPowMina chapter 28 . 7/18/2013 OH SASUKE, I MISS YOU, YOU ICE CUBE, EMO PRINCE, YOU! You were so mean to her and you broke my heart in the letter...But you are still missed :') Oh how i wish for him to come back to Konoha in the series, since he is dead (WAAAAAAH) here... |
