no orochimaru you derd men and the time for you to go out and he did it with the sinn dead Naruto took the men sword for himsife and mand a corba beit and hat for him now .

Territory chakra? Hmm someone has watched Yu Yu Hakisho

His name was Hiruzen Sarutobi his father was sasuke sarutobi

Sarutobi's first name is Hiruzen, but his father's name was actually Sasuke in canon.

Did you know that there is something called 'self fulfilling prophecy' if one is called 'Demon' countless times they will change their self-image into that of a demon. Thus Naruto's personalities in cannon make no sense from a sociologist nor a psychologist point of view. It is so entirely out of reality that Naruto's personality could be described as 'artificial' in concordance to the environmental variables.

To surmise Naruto should be dark and evil not happy-go-lucky, naive, trusting, hyperactive boy with raman addiction.

Great story! Looking forward to more and seeing what else you have written

cool

you know i actually feel sorry for naruto he had to get the most absolute worst team possible a pink haired banshee that would sooner shatter your ear drums then say something nice and a brooding emo king who needs to get out hes probably gay to considering he had all those girls fawning over him and he just concentrated on itachi and naruto

I hope you have Sakura viciously beaten at some point in this. Rape optional. She's a cunt.

I love what your doing here, for a whilr i haf thought naruto had already reached his bankai. My k owledge on bleach os unfortunetly lacking. Your a very good writer the only problrem i can see off the top off my head is how you too use the overplayed " angst/ emo" trait for sasuke or people who overtone black, for that i am dissapoint

interesting

Awesome story I think Naruto needs a LOT of character development in this one

good story

i read, i'm reviewing, but i'm moving onto the next chapter instead of repeating.

You don't explain yourself well at all. As someone who's never seen Bleach this story is just... frustrating. I mean, last I checked this was a Naruto story but I don't understand anything going on. I can't visualize anything in this story because you assume everyone has seen bleach. The characters are OOC without provocation. It's just... not well done at all