I for one love this story, You certainly have a way with words and how to flow with a story and giving detailed descriptions on the charaters emotions and their little mannerisms. I am learning and you are one of my Faves on here. Keep up with the great work.

lol it took me a while to catch up and finish reading the story but i actually made it! :P

what can i say, this is really an awesome story! i loved it so much! you're a great writer, i like how you can write about all the aspects (good and bad) of their relationship always better and getting things even more interesting :) and you totally made me fall for this pairing lol! great job indeed!

OMG this had to be ur best chappi ever u are an amazing writer

check out my story its called "days go by"

aww! im freakishly close to crying! yay! i can't wait to read the next one!

:]

-coop

Awh! I'm so glad I don't have to flame you. Or murder you for that matter. Everything turned out right in the end- just as it should. I loved the way you toyed with my emotions- the whole way through reading all I could think about was whther Trish was dead or not. Some sick and twisted part of me was wondering what would happen if she was and the story left off on a sour note, but I think you gave us all closure but definitely left it open for some Lana/Jeff goodness. I'm looking forward to reading that by the way!

Oh dear- your writing technique is so good. I don't really know how to describe it, but I'll try anyway. When I read your fics you don't describe things so little I can't imagine things, yet you don't overdescribe things so that I have to spend most of my time perfectly visualising what you wrote.

HAHA. I read a few chapters before this, and the scene with Randy strpping brought tears to my eyes. Oh, how I wish there could be more of those sorts of tears! It had me cringing and laughing at the same time. This story has had the perfect mix of humor and EVIL, CRUEL, MEAN, TWISTED heartache, sorrow and jealousy.

A JOB WELL DONE!

ps. Thanks for the shoutout! One of the greatest people- I ain't never been called that before! You're pretty fly yourself. ;]

omg! i was like crying already. i was already down on my knees praying that trish would be ok! but then, she lived! and so did RKO jr.! that was such an amazing chapter! perfect ending to the perfect story! can't wait for the next installment. great job! no words can say how this is one of the best stories ever!Ü

Reece you scared the shit out of me! You will never pull that move again if you EVER plan on using certain parts of your body! With that being said I still love you, even if you gave me the scare of the century lol...

now on to the long review cuz I know you love it...You write beautifully with such creative thoughts that can be matched by no other. It’s always sad to see a story ending especially if I adore it so much but I look forward to reading your next installment to the Randy/Trish saga even though that means that you get another opportunity to scare the bah Jesus out of me! Im just glad Trish, Randy and Me made it through this story alive, even if you cut it kinda close in the end ;)

xoxoxoxo

Jhanelle

Oh Randy, Trish and the little bambino...how sweet?

They came a long way, and that the worst was behind them, hopefully, they have nothing but good things ahead. I'm really looking forward to the next part...can't wait to see how ex-womanizing Randy Orton deals with having a little girl. That should be REALLY interesting.

All in all, GREAT JOB!

I love it. You keep getting better and better.

xoxoxo

Shanny

Oh, that was so sweet! I'm glad she lived...though the parts where Randy thought he had lost her was absolutely beautiful. You have a knack for writing about grief!

Thanks for a fabulous story Reece! Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next!

That chapter absolutely rocked! When I heard that Trish was still alive, I was practically screaming in joy and happiness. You sure do know how to get my adrenaline rushing. )

Again, like all of your other stories, you have never ceased to amaze me with your writing skills. From the first chapter all the way to the last one, you have kept me on the edge of my seat, waiting for more.

Well, I can't wait for the sequel. I'll be on the lookout for it. I just can't get enough of your writing.

-Tragically Twisted

LOVE IT.

Nice ending, especially for a guy to write about childbirth.

Now get crackin on the other stories!

XOXO

I think you can judge a good story or chapter when you hear yourself saying, "I'm not gonna cry" at least 5 times. I knew you couldn't let Trish die. Seeing Randy in shock and so devastated truly upset me. I had to hold myself back from reading ahead to see if Trish would make it. I was relieved when everything was OK. I told you before I love this pairing, so I can't wait for "Impossible Princess." Reece, you rock!

Well, I heard there was a drama party in chapter 22, and I just had to come and join in! Wow! You have cojones, great job! You totally threw everyone a curve and it was awesome!

ahh! please please write more! i have been in love with this story since the begining & can't wait for more! great job! :]

-coop

Part of me is doing cartwheels because Trish may be dead...the other part of me is aching for Randy...I'll console you baby, Shanny'll make it all better.

I love what you did with the chapter. Randy's determination to get to Trish, running, pain, getting hit by a car, the confrontation in the hospital...all of it proves how much he loves her. And his grief is beautiful

I'm sure that you may get some flack over this chapter, but all I have to say is this...it was brilliant. I like the twist, the angst, the raw emotion. YOU were feeling it, that's why you wrote it, don't give into the ney-sayers...push that envelop...you're doing a fantastic job!

Take the negative reviews with a grain of salt...if they want it differently, they need to write it themselves.

Keep it up honey; I'm on the edge of my seat with this one.

xoxoxo

Shanny