ok well I've read the whole thing and its not bad, its a little social, not as techy as I personally would have liked but nice.
Very Family oriented.
A fun read.

BUT the ending is terrible!
I hate cliffhangers!
Was there ever an ending?

Sweet, and funny.

Now that was all over the board.

Love the fanfic, rereading int. Uou say Keegan Conner Tracy was in the Seven Days episode Frank Parker 2.0, there is no episode by that title the actual title was where she played Claire, an AI that has an obsession with Frank Parker. I have seen the episode and there is no mention of nanites, only in the fanfic A women scorned (which I might add has been unfinished for a while). I mean no offense only Jake 2.0 and Seven Days are two of my favorite shows.

Where can I get a copy of those 4 unaired episodes? Oh and this was awesome! Loved it, voouldn't stop reading 'til I was done!

love the whole story you did a wondeful job reflects the show and other works of keegan tracy well hope to read more

um could i talk you in to a sequal?

really cute story, i love it

its the perfect jake/diane story

I cant wait to read on!

Great story, very few typos, and by the way, chapter 5 was hilarious

“What’s wrong with Kyle?”

“He doesn’t even notice you at work.”

“He notices me plenty after work.”

“Fran!”

Aw... sweet! :D Love the interaction between the characters.

This is a really great story. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you.

Hi.

(Some helpful, constructive critism)

Your story started off really great, but what happened? As the plot started to thicken, the fic became more and more domestic. I mean, that's a part of it sure, but most of the scenarios with the NSA have just seemed to vanished. Where's that part of the action? I doubt any government will be silent for that long...

P.S. Good story :) .

I love it! I love it! I love it!

I can't wait for your next chapter!

Todd Eule aka Death Owl aka Dumont - a stroke of genius!

I love the references to the Jake2.0 episodes. I've also noticed what you meant by KCT's mannerisms, i'm pretty sure i've caught a few of them in your story. Don't forget how she stroked the orange juice glass in 40 Days!