I love Ryo's character in this (and Bakura's so far!) You're a good writer.

Oh my gosh, you officially made ryou almost like bakura. You bastard. Okay I'm done even though I don't like how ryou is like bakura, as a fellow loner I know how he feels. So this is pritty good. Keep writing.

Good better than some I've seen. Keep up the good work! Some people can learn life lessons from this.

By the way i was the one who commented a few minutes ago xD it would be DIRECTLY below this one

:O This is very niceeeeee, I like how Ryou did it this way than just waiting it out. AND YESSS Epilogue would be veryyyy nice *o* Ryou mentioned what would have happened if Malik had found out (if it was true during the time) that he would do very nice interesting things to Bakura *grins evilly* Ku ku ku...
But yea, I would love to at least see a 'next day' sort of chapter OwO

rofl dont yell at my cookie!

Oh my... Ryou's a teensy bit off, isn't he?

Malik is my favorite character, I think all of them were excellent, though. Bakura's parting line was so cool... & the entire story was all British! Words like 'tosser' and 'reckon' and other British things! Is it because you're British? Is it? I bet it is.
I can't believe Bakura did that! And for only £20, too! Though I'll admit it is behavior much better suited to his character...
Quite shocked by Ryou, needless to say. Duke made me like him right at the very end, I wasn't too impressed with him before that point.

I can't decide if I want Bakura to have died or not, or if maybe I want Ryou to get hit by a truck... Huh.

Ummmm wow. I did not see that coming at all. XD i am actually laughing my ass off. Of course im dissapointed it didnt turn out with ryou and bakura as the sweet loving coupke, but the end was just as good. XD stoopid blonde hoe *-* bitches get stitches as they say. Im looking forward to more works!

I liked the story. Let me know if your going to write another story similar to this.

Lol. I'd honestly liked this story because it seemed like a relationship that wasn't riddled with as much weirdness as other and less unrealistic. However, this is also pleasing to read and I'd started to notice weird things about Ryou that didn't make sense. So yeah, it's been a nice read. :)

hahahahahahaha oh my god!
Ryou for the win!
I really did'nt think this would be how it ended, I mean I thought for sure they would make up and get back together and have hot steamy sex!
hahaha!
Loved this!
Thanks for writing it.

awesome story

Woah! I was not expecting that, congratulations :) it's been ages since I've been surprised like that in a fanfic, or book for that matter.

I thought that this story was very interesting...
-Silver

You have an interesting way of writing Ryou's perspective. It's a good story. Hopefully I'll be able to finish it later...