Reviews for The Crimson Ritual
Evangeline the Fallen chapter 46 . 12/5/2010
Wow, i loved the story! It is probably one of the best slash fics i have ever read. -Etf
NailPolishRemover chapter 45 . 7/22/2009
Wow, I couldn't stop reading this; my eyes were practically glued to the screen. Incredible story! :D
AccountKiller6189 chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
This story was awesome!

That John Putnam was really creepy..
musicjunkie36 chapter 46 . 10/23/2008
Okay so i just read all of this story in like 2 days (and also getting yelled at my brother for hogging the computer haha) but it was so worth it, this story was jsut so awesome and i love reid/tyler haha they're just so freakin adorable. can't wait to start the sequel.

p.s. its followed not fallowed
SylvanSpirit chapter 46 . 8/25/2008
wow.

amazing..

u are truly an amazing writer

wow..

can't wait to read ur sequel..

its gonna be exciting..

and i really love how u gave each member a separate power...

its amazing..

and since my fav char is tyler..

i can't wait til the sequel because i can practically smell something

wow..

just wow.
serenitysmalfoy chapter 46 . 8/5/2008
Freaking awesome! I absolutely *love* this story. And I WANT MORE! Hehe. It stands on it's own very well but there really should be more of it.

I love how you characterized Pogue, and the tone you put into your story. It was very well written and I can't wait to read more!
RosietheMoogle chapter 46 . 7/22/2008
It took me two days to finish this story, and only because at 5AM I had to give up and get some sleep before finishing it.

AND IT WAS WORTH EVERY MOMENT! XD

Pogue is my fave besid Caleb, and too see him as the main character, facing all these obstacles *Shakes head and is speechless*. That happened a lot, btw, me being speechless lol. Which is not an easy thing to accomplish, let me tell you! He loves Caleb so much, willing to give up his life for him (and am I looking forward to when things hit the fan when Claeb finds out! XD), to go to Hell and back and it's just...GUH!

I also liked how you gave parts of the fic to Tyler and Reid, explored their lives and relationship as well. AND WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO TYLER! WHAT DOES JOHN WANT!

You're an amazing writer that sucked me completey into this story and I'm bouncing in my seat right now lol. I can't wait for the sequel and more from you! XD I also enjoy your Ways To...fics lol.
The Silent Smurf chapter 46 . 7/15/2008
I loved this story. It was a pleasant change from the millions of Reid/OCs out there. I love it. Pogue/Caleb and Reid/Tyler have just become my favourite ships, thanks to you.

There were a few spelling and grammar errors throughout the story, but it took nothing away from the quality of this fic. It was well-written and you have great attention to detail. I look forward to the sequel.

-Smurf
orene treke chapter 46 . 6/30/2008
Way to go girl! You got it done! A brilliant ending and a perfect set up for a sequel. You must be a sucker for punishment!

I've been out of touch for a while as my lappie absolutely refuses to connect to the net most of the time! Looks like that is getting sorted out so I will be able to get back to my own fics.

Looking forward to your sequel.
Mirajane Scarlet chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
I like how you've got a more detailed version of the guys' powers. In the movie, it's all kind of generic and it's never really said what powers they have exactly. So this is cool.

And the plot of the story so far seems interesting.

And... just because I'm a bitch like that (and a not so closeted grammar nazi)... lol...

Spelling Errors:

"A hooded figure stood in front of him, staring at him with dark eyes under it’s hood. Pogue tried in vain to get his voice to work, disparity wanting some answers but nothing came out." - it's should be its' or the, and disparity should be desperately... I think, unless you meant a different word.

-Princess-
Anime Girl23 chapter 46 . 6/26/2008
PLEASE POST THE SEQUEL ASAP! YOU CAN'T KILL POGUE! NOT AFTER ALL THIS!
The Black Rose16 chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
I absolutely love this story. Cant wait for the sequel.
animegurl715 chapter 46 . 6/4/2008
"Slash is wonderful and these four just screamed “ship us together”. *I so agree with this, it's not even funny. so very true!*

As for Tyler and John Putnum, only the sequel will tell…"

*woah, what! no...well, ok, it'll make the story more interesting, cause then reid'll wanna kick some ass!*

can't wait to see the sequal, it's exciting!i'm happy there'll be one!
deletedeletepleaz chapter 46 . 6/4/2008
So there is a sequel right and will this sequel show more Tyler/Reid?
JamieAnneJonas chapter 29 . 5/28/2008
im sad
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