That was hilarious! It made me laugh a lot! Thank you for this story! Keep writing!

Haha! Toshiro must've got a boner by now but Renji..he'll be dead...XD

hehehe... this was fun to read.

As I have been known to sayI APOLOGIZE FOR NOTHING!generally in regards to my music playlist) I love it- and I don't even know that much about Bleach, I just ran out of your Naruto fixs to read!

I really liked it! The end was so funny.

This is as hilarious now as it was the first time I read it, years ago... if you ever write more HitsuHina, please let us know XD

Aya, Renji ruined everything at the last moment... poor Vice-Captain XD But the story was still awesome, and I almost sympathise with poor Toshiro over his hidden feelings for Hinamori. Sweet!

HAHA great one!

This was hilarious...ahahaha XD

Oh dear, Renji XD what did you do? Haha and hear I thought he had eyes only for Rukia!? lol

This is brilliant. I was right there with Rangiku, fighting laughter all the way through. Great work. Though I kinda want to see Hitsugaya man up. Good work.

Rest assured... Its hilarious... Who knew Renji could do subtle? Sort of. :P
Poor Hitsugaya... (not really. *snicker)

And then it was all over with the smiting. Oh Renji, you were doing so well with the innuendo in the beginning! Poor Rangiku and Shūhei. I cackled at Rangiku trying not to burst into giggles saying her last line to her captain; any other person would've long since been rolling on the floor with laughter. This story is hilariously silly, and awesomely in character for the secret pervert that is Rangiku Matsumoto. I still giggle every time I read the ending!

Those three are evil.

Died of laughter. Great.