Reviews for The Mating Ball |
---|
SammyJams chapter 12 . 7/16 Loved this story! I can’t write to read the next Inuyasha story you write! |
Guest1 chapter 12 . 6/3 Hold up...if Kikyo and Inuyasha are married and Kagome and Sesshomaru are married, they basically married their sibling. (Ew) Kikyo married Inuyasha and that by default makes Sesshomaru and Kagome (or vice versa) brother and sister even if they are so called "step," they are still siblings regardless. Yeeeaaah that's a no for me. Started off great until I realized that information. If anything, Kikyo should have just been sent home and feel the true defeat of losing to her twin who is now happy have someone that loves and protects her. But it isn't my story to tell so yeah. I didnt read all of the other reviews but I am perplexed that no one else has considered this. |
mariselortiz chapter 9 . 3/27 kill the bitch. i will not have loyalties to the fther or sister. bah |
young kagome chapter 8 . 3/7 No. I got bored at this point. I really tried to finish. |
Setsu.love.cain chapter 12 . 3/6 Me encanto, la recomiendo, dios que final maravilloso. |
dreamerkins chapter 12 . 1/28 I loved this! beautiful story! a couple plot holes... nothing huge... i, honestly, almost skipped this story, because the summary was... not great... but the story isn't anything like the summary at all! it's cute, sweet, fluffy, and utterly ridiculous. .. while hiding a darker back story, that makes it so amazing! so glad I gave it a chance! I think if you made more of your summary, you might have one of the most read sesskag stories on here! |
marushumnluvr4eva chapter 12 . 11/4/2019 this was a good story. i'm glad i read it. it was funny, at times sad, but it made me like the story b/c of the content. as always kagome was a strong, loyal, loving, and understanding person. she was also brave and full of courage for those she cared for. sesshoumaru started out sneaky and cold toward his plans to kill his intended, but i'm glad he changed his mind and allowed inuyasha and kikyou to be together. of course, those two did do something that was deserving of death, in the end sesshoumaru found the solution to the problem and got the ONE he wanted. keep up the great writing. c'ya' |
o0-SilverMoon-0o chapter 12 . 9/2/2018 I loved it! Thank you for sharing! |
MOON LIGHT RED chapter 12 . 5/18/2018 This was a very good story. Thank you. |
grimmich chapter 4 . 1/28/2018 Youre missing a chapter |
grimmich chapter 1 . 1/28/2018 Doesnt everyone bow in japanese culture? Im pretty sure that curtsey is a european thing. |
Stillnight chapter 12 . 1/8/2018 I love this. Ending was good. BTW, I cried at "Hatori's" death. I got really attached to Hatori, and this one is close I can get to read male!Kagome story. There's a severe lack of male Kagome stories in the fandom. Or if there are any, I certainly haven't gotten across any decent ones. |
Lullaby Princess chapter 1 . 12/19/2017 Kikyo: Fate has been cruel and order unkind How can I have sent you away? The blame was my own; the punishment, yours The harmony's silent today But into the stillness I'll bring you a song And I will your company keep Till your tired eyes and my lullabies Have carried you softly to sleep Once did a pony who shone like the sun Look out on her kingdom and sigh She smiled and said. "Surely, there is no pony So lovely and so well beloved as I" So great was her reign and so brilliant her glory That long was the shadow she cast Which fell dark upon the young sister she loved And grew only darker as days and nights passed Soon did that pony take notice that others Did not give her sister her due And neither had she loved her as she deserved She watched as her sister's unhappiness grew But such is the way of the limelight, it sweetly Takes hold of the mind of its host And that foolish pony did nothing to stop The destruction of one who had needed her most Lullay moon princess, goodnight sister mine And rest now in moonlight's embrace Bear up my lullaby, winds of the earth Through cloud, and through sky, and through space Carry the peace and the coolness of night And carry my sorrow in kind Kagome, you're loved so much more than you know May troubles be far from your mind And forgive me for being so blind The years now before us Fearful and unknown I never imagined I'd face them on my own May these thousand winters Swiftly pass, I pray I love you; I miss you All these miles away May all your dreams be sweet tonight Safe upon your bed of moonlight And know not of sadness, pain, or care And when I dream, I'll fly away and meet you there Sleep... Sleep.. Sleep.. |
Mariselo chapter 12 . 11/13/2017 Wow after all the neglect she found true love. Me like very much. Keep up the writting. Truly enjoy your stori. Thank you for your efforts and dedication. |
KnightOwl247 chapter 2 . 1/13/2016 Of course Sauske won;-) he is Sayske uchiha-ahem-Toriyama |