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This was soooo good pls continue ... These stories make me smile to think you guys are so talented on here pls keep up the work your doing the universe a service in a strange way!

I totally love it thus far mwah!

This was amazing, and it was just getting good! Major cliffhanger I am dying to know what happens next! It's been a while, but please come back and update this, it's a really great concept!

Oh my god u can't stop now I know it's. Web years but still please if u check this website at all please continue

Ok so this is actually my first time being affected by your cliff hangers. You are truly evil! Your writing is very good and to do such a thing is horrible so please for the love of all that's good and pure... UPDATE soon!

Ok so this is actually my first time being affected by your cliff hangers. You are truly evil! Your writing is very good and to do such a thing is horrible so please for the love of all that's good and pure... UPDATE soon!

You should really update this story! It's really good!

this is an awesome fic!

im so suprised that this didnt get as much attention as Cry

btw. wut happened to updating every friday?

lol. i hope u update both of ur fics. there great.

goodlife93

I don't mean to be a pest, but are you ever going to update this? It's a really great story! Anyway, I understand if you are busy or you just don't want to write it anymore, but it would be nice to read more of it.

I like it. Very good plot. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow, I'm surprised this fic. hadn't caught my eye before. It's really very good! I hope to hear more about what will happen between ChiChi and Goku, along with Vegeta and Bulma in your next update, which i hope will be anytime soon.

Pacing is a little slow, but otherwise cool and original. I can see that happenin' to the ladies, but where would/did Krillin go?

Oh! Please continue! I can't stand cliffhangers! Damn you!( lol, jk,jk! Anyway, I like it so far! Keep writing!)

at least Vegeta is back to his old self again