I was really liking this story, but at the end I was really not getting it. I just don't understand what is happening with this?

this was beautiful. Love the links between fighting and intimacy, and your writing style. Thank you for sharing!

I really like your writing style. This was well written; I wish it was longer though.

I've been writing short reviews lately, but that was good. Satisfying.

I know I've read this before but I don't think I reviewed.

Good work ] I really like how you explain the fight. It switches a lot, but that's okay. Drags out the fight and their little scene. Haha ]

oh...my god...

what are you like some kind of writing god!

DAMN THIS IS SO GOOD!

i loved it all! every single bit had me shivering in delight.

and the way you described it all...it was just fanantastic...no it was more than that! i was kinda angry that you only got 5 reviews when you should have like 500 or more! XP

anyways i loved it! nejiten forever!

great job! I loved the style of it! :D

Well done all around.

Yeah. I really like this story too. It was really creative! Great job!

Wow, interestingly written! I loved it! It's getting harder and harder to find good NejiTen stories like this these days :(

Nice oneshot. I don't think I've actually read a story in that particular tense before...I know it's third person, but it the way you wrote it makes it feel different somehow.

Keep up the good work, ne?

~Spirit.