aw I like yours alot better then the one I wrote but mine was lily and james. And it didn't have all of it in there. But yours was so much better I loved it. :D.

It's really cute.

"The reason I don’t want you is because I need you, like Lockhart needs a mirror..." Hehe. I thought that was funny.

I love your ideas! Good job!

aaww how sweet and ggreat little story!:D:)

it is really good

Omygosh that was so sweet! I almost cried, cried i almost lol!1 h/hr forever!

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Thats so sweet!

aw...that was beautiful! i have totally heard those statements before and this story just made them even better! I loved it!

absolutely love it. ifact i feel this way for someone and its really acurate, it's great

Josh

this was a cute story write more like this I love Harry and Hermione

I thought this was very cute. I liked the style..unlike other people. Therefore thumbs...UP :)

ahh soo sweet i wish someone would tell me that

great great great awsome cute story please continue i love it cant wait to see what else u write

Excellent! Truly Marvelous! You said you got this from a bulletin floating around MySpace? Until next time! Harry and Hermione forever and always!

Dear SiriusGal:

This sort of thing can be charming in a song or a poem, but in prose it just makes one wonder why Harry's being so doggone coy. Thumbs, therefore, down.

Sincerely,

Qoheleth