That was good! ... Except for one thing: Luna's father isn't named Lionel. His name is Xenophilous. It's even in the books, like, it's mentioned at least fifty times. It's quite alright if you just didn't remember, I'm just letting you know. I loved the story, by the way!

A sad piece, but beautifully written. I like it. More, please.

This was amazing.

I've always loved Luna and Harry, and this fic has a perspective of their relationship I've never encountered.

'This was unrequited and reciprocated love all in one huge tangled mess...Only without any of the perks.'

This seemed to sum it all up.

While I generally enjoyed your story, I feel it is not complete. I mean, the end is kinda awkward and Harry still doesn't have (all) his memory back; he still seems unable to give Luna what she wants.

Your story leaves me with a very sad feeling. :(

It's exceptionally well-written, though.

Beautiful. I liked it.

-demonicnargles

Well done.

Good start! I look forward to more

Wow...this was so beautiful. Amazingly written...I don't know how else to describe it...

Ah, damn, this is a good story. Love the whole characterization and the sour skittles. XD Really, we need to see more of these well written sweet stories.