Man you're really dragging this story. It's seems uneventful, you rushed through the Uchicha's fighting scene as if it wasn't important. Yet, at the hospital you have to explain how they're healing, which again isn't a big deal. I don't know, I'm getting bored.

Sooooooo... Is Tsunade just a figurehead then? The elders are only there in canon to be advisors, their opinion doesn’t even have to be taken into account. Tsunade as Hokage is supposed to be the leader, which means its supposed to be her final say in any ninja affiliated matter. I’m just confused on how your system works, no hate! I actually really love how you made Sasuke and Sakura’s relationship!

Well.. that escalated even quicker xdd

Well, that escalated quickly xD and Sasuke is really OOC, but I will give it a try.

I read this story after reading you other one called what could’ve been. I LOVED that other story so much that I went onto your profile to find this one.

Although this was a decent story, I can’t get over how OOC Sasuke was with all the times he called Sakura “love”. As for Sakura herself, I liked her at the beginning and how you portrayed her as being confident and also having becoming an Anbu captain. Sadly, I feel that as the story progressed, her character regressed such that she once again seemed to be obsessed with Sasuke and became so dependant and weak rather than trying to remain strong. Another thing I had a problem with was the fact that even though she just gave birth to a baby she “forgot” about him when Sasuke was brought into the hospital and the fact that she refused to call him by name. Seems very impersonal and cold to me but again, that’s just my personal opinion.

All in all. I did read the whole thing and enjoyed it, just wished you had kept Sasuke more in character and made Sakura not so whiny I guess. Great writing!

Good read

LOVED IT

Please write another it was BOSS!Lola!please don't give up on this.

It was a beautiful story! I can't emphasize it enough. It was a really REALLY good story. I was in suspense. I smiled. Threatened to cry. Gasped. Felt all sorts of things while I was reeled in and hooked to this beautiful creation. I truly loved this story. It was a marvellous read and it was written quite well. Very VERY good job

Awwww :3 All smiles

I like one of the last sentences. I watched his family grow little by little. It really is quite possible that in some of the larger clans, persons from other villages or who became orphans were accepted into clans and became a part of the whole united family. I like how you not only provided a home for her in the Uchiha compound, but also had Sasuke consider her as family in the way he reasoned the matter out.

Oh the feels with this chapter! My eyes actually watered and was seeing blurry! Omg! Yes! U DEFINITELY got me feeling feels with this one right here

Breathing hard in suspense...

Seriously tho? 1 jook and Itachi dead? Hmmm. Ok

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