Ha! My nine year old cousin broke her nose playing pirates with her little brother last week. And she is a Narnia fan as well. Well, I remembered this story and read this to her and I was literally afraid she was going to choke on her drink. So good job!

Good job Pete, breaking AND stealing Lucy's nose.

Aww poor Lucy! Cute story though! :) And i loved Georgie's portrayl of Lu too. She did spectacular!

Oh! Poor, clueless Ed. I was laughing in anticipation from the moment he walked in. Well done!

i love it!

Oh that was so funny! I remember the first time I broke my nose (I played softball - it happens! LoL) and I freaked out as well. I can truly sympathize with Lu. Though I don't think I ever freaked out when someone "got my nose" as a kid. LoL. Well done.

i completely understand lucy and her nose, that's my favorite part of my face and i don't know how i would even begin to feel if i broke it.

Ah, poor Lucy... this story brought back good memories of my dad playing "Got the Nose" with me. Also brought up the not so pleasant memory of being 15 and breaking my nose.

I think you did a really good job of characterizing the children in this fic. Really, it is terrible to break your nose... Lucy doesn't seem materialistic at all... very realistic.

I absolutely love this story there are not enough stories of the kids when theyre little. I agree with you on the fact that the BBC version was annoying I watched them when I was eleven and when the new movie came out Iwas so glad .Georgie Henley is adorable. Hey could you write more stories about the kids when theyre little maybe Peter's first day of kindergarten he and Lucy are my favourite characters.

Real cute. I liked the game of "Got your nose".

rofl. So cute. I love the comparison of both times and I love Ed especially.

“By the Lion’s Mane! Pete really conked you good, didn’t he?”

Lucy let out an anguished cry and flew out of the room, sobbing into her hands. Susan sighed and got up to follow her. Some times, even though they had crowns on their heads, and a country to rule, Susan couldn’t help but think they were care free children living in Finchley.

Cute! Great job!

That was really funny and cute! I thought the ending was hilarious! I rate it 5/5. Love this fic. Please make another one.

Poor Lucy...Her nose got broken!

Utterly adorable,(especially Ed looking for the hole in Lu's face), though it don't seem right without Peter's input to round off the end.

Cheers,

Tails

P.S. BBC Lucy WAS annoying, I am in complete agreement!

That was well-writen and amusing. I probably would have titled it "Got Your Nose!" though, not only for Peter "getting" it from her when she was little, but also for when he "got her" when the were teens. And yeah, Lucy does sound a little materialistic, but I can't really say I blame her. Getting your nose broken hurts like all hell, trust me, I know. Poor baby. -pats Lucy's head lovingly-