This is a very interesting and well-written story. Titans for the older crowd, but not as dark as it could get. I really like it, but that's what I expect from you.

You even wrote it so well that I didn't much mind the crush mess-up, something that I normally loathe. Incredible.

And Darcy is a decent character.

All in all, very well done.

The second I saw costume designer, I was hoping it would be her. :D

This is really good! Please, continue!

ah, good to see that I wasn't the only one to notice the little 'Hmm, but what exactly was going on down there?' between Tim and Logan. About a minute after it took a break from them I figured out "Hey... that was just them talking for about two pages. Without any blatant barbs at each other. WTF?" then... lol.

anyway, cool to see how this is progressing... is this 'Darcy' in danger now, though?

LATER!

yes... er, no, this isn't going to be pretty. not completely sure about that first part (have to agree with Jinx there; how can you read that much technical speak without being bored to tears?), but... Darcy is the somewhat 'veteran'-rank politician who is being pulled into a possibly deadly plan by some guy who just seems so plan-ahead that... er... not going there.

if the second part is anything to go by, exposition into how Jinx got to be afraid of water and how she 'found' her powers, and how the 'bad guys' are about to become the 'good guys' by accident (if the Titans don't get in the way first), aaand... on that last part... Timothy Drake. GET YOSELF TOGETHER! you got one warning and you still can't make up your mind? googly, man, just googly.

LATER!

(why did I stop at just chapter 1 back then? geez, this is good)

Well, besides the... screw this. This is pretty good! Like, (of course), still 'them' but obviously in an AU. and it WORKS. like... no, not gonna even try to describe it. How long did this take to plan out?

on to the constructive criticism area: what can he say? besides repeating-repeating certain area facts (Rhode Island and California; how often did either occur in this one chapter?), near perfect! why 'near'? cuz if it was perfect, then why would I have ever found it?

(continuing...)

LATER!

LOL I have an obsession with grammar/typos . . .

Of all the phrasing- she should through you off the roof.

Did you mean "she should THROW you off the roof?" please forgive me for seeming rude, but it made me laugh.

I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing your story, but I am currently running off a DialUp connection, and it takes nearly five minutes to load the stinkin' review box. So I'll do it now . . .

I'm not usually a fan of A/Us, and even less of a fan of Teen Titans (I used to be rabid, but . . . . lol then one day I wasn't.) But I am truly enjoying this story. It's a breath of fresh air to read something NOT riddled with typos and other annoying mistakes. You ARE a fabulous writer, and for that I must commend. Though, sometimes, I find myself getting confused, but I'm usually able to pick what ever's happening back up before something climatic/major happens. :-)

Great Job! I look forward this and am pleased to understand there is also a sequel-expect a review at the end of each story . . . I truly am sorry I cannot review every chapter because your story deserves it! :-)

I haven't really read Batman nor have i read any stories with Tim Drake as Robin, but the Robin that is in most of the Teen TItans (except for the latest revival) was Richard (Dick) Grayson, and during the New Teen Titans comic run (the one from 1980 that I'm currently readin) left Batman because for similar reason that Tim Drake in this story did (mostly because he felt like he was always living in Batman's shadow and had to make something of himself, which is why he later changed his persona to Nightwing when he reformed the Titans). I'm not going to ask you to change it or whatever, I'm just letting you know. and also it is kinda weird to read Tim Drakes name when I'm expecting Richard Drake. At least you didn't use Jason Todd (And if you don't know who he is than shame on you.)

Anyways, this is a good story, and I hope that you plan on updating soon and you didn't just stop writing it because I noticed that it hasn't been updated in 2 years.

I gotta be honest, so far it's a good story. And I'm all for crossovers, but implying that Marvel characters and DC character occupy the same world kinda seemed off,because of how both companies worlds view the people with powers. The X-Men are feared and hated even though their the good guys. and DC's heroes are loved more than pop icons. But other than that, what I've read is very good.

-kobez-

Perfect ending! I loved how you made this story feel like it was the first of many more. I can not wait to read the rest! Please keep on doin what you're doin. Your really good at it.

My sister recommended this story to me, and i have to say i really enjoyed the first chapter. I like how you made everything flow together, something i haven't seen in a long time. Well on to the next chapters. Keep up the good work!

OMg! I have to say, this fic was amazing! every little thing about it blended together and fit perfectly. You managed to change to keep the characters in character, while adding in their own maturity. I don't know how you did it, but it was amazing to read. I was on the edge of my seat, and I loved how you put the Beast into action there, good stuff! I'm going to read the sequal right now!

Very very splendid! I enjoyed reading the whole thing. And I LOVE how you portrayed Beast Boy, he was very much as how I would have pictured him at that age ]. 5 stars!

Awesome stuff here. I love your pacing, so far

no!

oh plz tell me there is a sequel this was such a beutifully written story plz plz plz tell me there a sequel ill even be your beta