Beautiful

Wow! I read the whole thing in one sitting! It ws AMAZING! The sexual tension between them was soo palpable that I felt it in my bones! Gave me tingles! Loved it! Gonna get to the sequel now! ;*

Well written. I would only suggest keepin the language in tube with the times and era. The story held my interest

Just loved the little twists in your version! Perfect! Hope to read more from you 3

One of the Best Hades and Persephone fanfics I've read. Great plot, good character development, it was fantastic.

Errors in Mythology: Zeus is not her Uncle, but her father.
Prometheus is not a mortal, but a Titan. Although he gifted humanity with fire. Zeus punished him by tying him to a rock and commanding vultures to attack him for all of eternity.

I really like the modern flare to this old and sad myth. I m happy to see a different take on Persephone

I rather liked this story, and how the characters interact and develop. Hades and Persephone are my favorite Greek pairing, and I think you portrayed them well.

-Arciere

what an obsessive love without going overboard, it's more passionate with a few twists

you've done a spectacular job at alluring me, as far as i'm concerned... for now. good luck and i look forward to continuing. :)

I luv ur writings n d way u present ur story!

Best story i have read in years! Thank you so much for writing this is was beyond amazing! AHHHH it was so good! :) *kisses

omg! i love this! please tell me when the sequel is going to be n here! xoxoxo

Keep this chapter! Some of the excitement does go but this chapter is vital for the story!

Oh my gosh! This HOT! I love it! Please keep writing!