Awe. He cares :)
Great story, I liked it really much

Aww...so cute!

;)

w Tres cute. I want to snuggle this OS.

That was so . . angst-y.

I can't believe Machi was jealous of Honda at first.

Yuuuuuukiiiiii shooooould stoooooop beeeeeeiiiing soooooo alluuuuuuuriiiiiing toooooo Maaaaaaachiiiiiiii.

Maybe then she'll start . . not . . liking him. o.o

aayah! kawaii! XD that last sentence was so perfectly placed! :) loved the part with yuki chasing after machi and her yelling at him to leave her alone! :) loved it! :)

I really like your take on Machi. Very cute. I don't even remember Yuki calling Machi by her first name... I have got to start reading the manga again...

I'm glad you didn't make it a confession of love. I burst out laughing at the last line.

that was sweet. I like the fact that you got her being all shouty with him, and him being stubborn, just like in the manga. VERY in character

nice job

well, aside from some grammatical issues (maybe you should get a BETA), this is good. i'm commenting as i read this, so it might be a little garbled. you can pm me or reply to this review if you get confused.

-when you're writing a person's thoughts, you might want to put it into italics to avoid confusion. also, "I wonder what Sohma-kun is doing now?

Machi thought suddenly."

that can stay in the same paragraph.

-it's fluffy, but that's okay.

-at first i thought the "you're looking pretty today too" comment was a little too weird, ubt then i remembered that this was YUKI. he says stuff like that. so it works.

good job. it was a fun read and machi and yuki were both pretty much in character.

Its so romantic! i cry it so beautiful! T-T Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy. I wish i had a Yuki! But all the guys that surround me are doofuses... T-T It was an amazing story! I give 5 stars!

That was nice, cute and funny, I don't believe it...you got Manabe's personality down really well. AND HE WASN'T EVEN THERE!

Nice job, especially the murderer comment about Manabe.

that was so sweet! :)

wonderful,.,. :)

knowing someone cares,.,. it's great! :)

Aw!

adorable

Wow...Machi and Yun-Yun-er, I mean Yuki...I never thought about that pairing but I like it! I'm adding this one to my favorite stories! See ya!

aw! so cute :D