333 re read

i love everything about this and was heartbroken to realize that it wasn't finished but i can only hope one day you do tankies so much for the chance to read such a masterpiece i always come back to this when I'm said and it makes me forget the world for a little and enter into my favorite video game!

An adorable romance that's genuine and loyal to the source material. Quickly becoming one of my favorites.

I'm so glad you included The Lion King 2. I was majorly disappointed that Pride Lands in KH2 was not Lion King 2. And of course, them being lions ftw.

I have never looked it up to know if this is legit or not, but everyone says that Beast's name is Adam. That said, I couldn't help finding it funny that Belle just called him the Prince. Funnier to me was the fact that Kairi never asked what his name was. That aside, it was a cute chapter. I really like how you portray their friendship.

Their ability to switch is really interesting. I liked the Roxas/Riku exchange. It was tense, but not too aggressive. I'm intrigued as to who Sora had sex with. Hoping to find out!

I really liked the learning to swim scene, especially how Riku jumped to showing off as he's used to but then wished he'd had trouble so that Sora would touch him. I thought that was equally funny and believable.

I sincerely hope that one day you'll find the motivation again to continue this story, because it's amazing. I love the story and plot itself, the characterization is perfect!

Ok, I was going to wait until the end of the story to review, but this story is far too great for me to wait. I love this story! It's not often I come across Kingdom Hearts stories that not only take place within the actual KH universe, but also feature a SoRi coupling, a supportive Kairi, an interesting and mysterious original villain, Disney worlds, AND BELIEVABLE CHARACTERIZATIONS! This story has all of that and more! I honestly find this story to be the most well-written KH fanfic that I've read in a very long time. It's like I'm reading a novelization of an actual sequel to the video game!
I like that you take the time to feature each of the trio in their own chapters. It gives a lot of insight into their thoughts and feelings. I also like how cagey Sora is being with everything. I always figured he'd be nervous and ashamed about his Anti Form and you've portrayed that beautifully. But most of all, I like the conflict of trust going on right now between Riku and Sora. No one ever really touches on how a relationship between those two would actually work out. It makes sense that they would have a lot of issues to work on before things go smoothly, and even then, there's always going to be a few bumps in every relationship. Realism is important, and you've captured that!
Your action scenes are intense and highly enjoyable. I was actually really concerned for Riku for a minute there. I like that you include specific gameplay references. It makes imagining each battle easy because I'm half picturing it like a snippet from in-game fights. Also, I like that you're letting Kairi fight, but you're also keeping it realistic in the sense that she's not suddenly Wonder Woman. It's almost irritating when other authors feel the need to empower Kairi immediately without making her work for it the way Sora and Riku did over the course of 2 years. So kudos to that.
I think I want to keep reviewing more often so my reviews don't end up as long as this one did.

This is awesome!

And by far one of the best KH fics I have ever read! Now that I have finally caught up to the last chapter, I cannot wait for the 25th!

Thanks so much for this story!

Yay! I can't wait for the next chapter, this is such a good story. Took me a while to catch up to it because life kept getting in the way, Don't worry about the road blocks and late updates, I know how those go. I hit them every once in a while, as well. XD I'm glad you still made Kairi an important part of this story. She's very likeable and isn't ignored. I actually like her, so that was important to me. I love the development of this story. And your nobodies are portrayed perfectly! One of my favorite scenes yet has to be when they went into Final Form! XD That was kick-assory 101, right there. XD

And yes, Riku has his moments of being a sap. And it's very like him to deny it. XD Anyway, thank you for the entertainment. -Bows- I'll be keeping an eye out for the next chapter!

Still no more? Are you dead? :-(

Hey! D I'm so glad that I found this fic, I was on a KH spree lately and I stumbled upon this fic~! YAY! I love the plot, but what I really LOVE is the way you made Sora so effing important to every different world and person, especially Roxas, Riku and Kairi! Honestly, I'm not a huge fan of Kairi, but I managed to tolerate her in your fic! LOL.

Can't wait for the next possible update! Cheers! *faves*

Looks like it's been a long time since this was updated, so I'll keep this short so as not to bug you over an abandoned project, but this was really quite nice; creative, vivid, and enjoyable. Thanks. :)

I know it's been about two years since you last posted a chapter, but I felt that I HAD to send you some sort of thanks for writing as much of this story as you did. I found this about a week ago, and I've had Fanfiction up on my phone ever since. Any time I was free (or not playing Birth By Sleep. You should know that your fic often took priority over an actually KH game. well done), I'd tear through a bit of this story, and it's been a real joy all the way through. Your need for accuracy shines, and I'm truly impressed. I knew that you hadn't finished this story when I began it, and I've been watching the chapter count in trepidation since around chapter 19, knowing that I soon would have to put this story aside.

That being said, I wish I didn't. I would dearly love to see where you planned to take this in the end. If you ever feel like writing more, know that there is at least one someone out there who would be thrilled to see another installation.

Thanks for the wonderful tale