Well, it wasnt exactly fanfiction, but i liked it. It was a little confusing but i understood. This is definetly not for the fluff lovers out there. I liked it alot though. It really personified Ginny and Draco, how the stories are all the same. I have thought this many times myself, and i am in the process of writting a new type of G/D. Well anyways, i really enjoyed it. It was a breath of fresh air after all the " happy endings" and " impossible outcomes". Job Well done.

Jamie

Very well-written. Lighthearted and musing. I liked it a lot. Really well done. I'm interested as to what else you've written now!

Ukgirl:)

sounds oddly like a psych paper with a twist of philosophy in there too..i like it; makes you think when you weren't expecting to have to..romeo & juliet twist with modern day stubborness..very very very good! WORLD CLASS WRITING!

I really like this writing style

I don't know what to say! I'm speechless, I love how the story had a sort of self-mocking tone to it. The writing was beautiful and flowed incredibly smooth. I loved the point of view it was original.

This story was really good, if it can be considered a story. I loved how it was about the patterns in all the stories, yet it happenend to weave a tale of its own. I look forward to reading more of your work!

This story was a refreshing take on the same stories D/G fans read over and over. I really enjoyed the style-you did a great job of capturing a contemplative mood that set the story off nicely. Thank you for posting it!

I really liked this. I thought it was very interesting how you sort of disected the cliche of romance stories, but then you analyzed why we like them at the end. The stories are not like life, but they aren't new to us either. I like how you made the reader question his/her motive for reading the story. Because we do know the ending, we do know excatly what will happen and yet we are still drawn in, we are still compelled to read every word and to doubt what we know is true. The story is comforting, even in it's unrealness. The reader still takes away a sense of "yes, that's the way it. That is right." Even though it isn't. I really liked this story.

~Allychik6

best fanfiction i've read in a long time. a little dry, but it was really good that way.

Whoa. This almost seems like an essay...

It's very...well, that's just it. I don't know. It was interesting. You acknowledged all the bad things about liking Draco and Ginny, that's for sure. Heck, you acknowledged all the bad things about liking FANFICTION.

But it was kind of pretty. In a way it's saying, 'yes, it's unbelievable, but it happened.' But in another way...it's saying...'this is ridiculous...or is it?'

It's all terribly confusing. I enjoyed reading this, don't get me wrong. I just think there's definitely a lot of unsaid meaning. :)

i absolutely loved it.

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ok ok it was a god fic the best ive read in a while the only ive read in a while lol XD.

won der ful! its so good i loved it ! :)

Oh wow...That was truly great, congradulations that has now become my official favourite story of all time on this site. The writing techniques were brillant. definatly adding it and you to my fav authors list and fav story list.

...in case you couldnt tell it was a good story and no critisizms-Ilana :)(Ps: Please excuse my terrible spelling.)

Holy crap. You are totally channeling the exact thought, stories, and fantasies i've had in the past. It was amazing, almost eerie... You are a truly amazing writer. If you ever need someone to give feedback for a story or something, email me.