Hawt! But sheesh watra ahole

Oh my god this was adorable. I love this couple and you did a great job with it.

Hey hey HEY! You can't just end... please don't... OH COME ON! DO MORE PLEASE? PLEASE?

POOR JACK! WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN? POOR JACKKKKKKKKKK!

great story btw gay sex is not illigal in texas you can be gay and have sex in china and texas yu just cant get married i know becase my friend who lives i china is comeing to elope in merica and my texas frien got married in chicago well there really more my ma's friends but you get my drift

I adore this story its hot! *squeals* Jack is so adorable showing his innocent side once and a while. Clay is very perverted which is nice to see with this pairing *w*

O-o

I gotta admit I felt somewhat disgusted how many times you described Jack little/innocent/childish.

And at first I was freaked out by how much of a douchebag Clay was.

But as I kept reading it all fit.

And I must say I enjoyed this story very much And it was extremly refreshing to see another characterization of Clay(Which actually suited him)

is...is it over? *cries* i dont want it to be over QQ Lol

i really liked this story

aww this is so cute x3 i love jack x clay :D this ones really good. i loved it.

Pleh... visible ribs. D: Regardless, I like this pairing. Good job.

AW that was awsome

Bless Jack and his little teenage heart.

Hello there, I usually don't review things because I'm lazy *is bricked* but I felt the urge if only to correct a few things from your Author's note since I happen to live in Texas.

"A/N: With regards to the whole ‘age of consent’ thing, I have attempted to research it, according to one website I looked at, gay sex is actually ILLEGAL in Texas, and in China (where I think the show is set) the age of consent is 21. I had no idea it was that bad! I’m English; we have one overall age of consent which is sixteen. And we can drink at eighteen…"

Gay sex wasn't illegal, it was sodomy that was (which is nitpicky because it does include gay sex). I say 'was' because this was changed in 2004, and is no longer illegal (well, you can still get in trouble for it if caught be the wrong people. but it is protected under the right of privacy). About ages: the age of sexual consent is 17, the age of a legal adult is 18, and the age where one is allowed to drink is 21.

Loved the first chapter, I'll get around to reading the second one after I get back from class.

i adore this story...it feels so real and my favorite paring. great work, would love somemore if posible