Oh, wonderful! A long Dave fic that's well written, coherent, and has charecters that are actually in charecter! I could kiss you, if I wasn't on the other end of the internet. Anyway, this is by far my favorite of all your ER fics, even though I'm a bit wary of NativeAmerican!Dave. But please, please, please keep writing- you can't just leave us all hanging! I know it's been a while since you updated, but maybe that will give you a fresh perspective... Or something... Really, I suppose I'm just begging.

Anyway, it's well written and in charecter, which i a very rare thing for an ER fic, and I think you've got a lot of talent.

-zorro x

Hi,
I know its been a long long time since you wrote this, and you have moved on to other things... but it is a great story, and if you ever found inspiration to continue it would be great. (I have run out of Dave fics to read... what can I say, his angst makes addictive reading!) This story is a very interesting take on the whole Dave and his crappy childhood theme. x

hiya! really loving ur story! it's great to read some good quality dave fics!
Shaz
xx

This is a great story so far! I'm sorry you stopped_

Great! Great ! Great ! I'm so happy you start again to write ! My dear Woman Warrior ! *big smile on my face*

i'm so glad that you updated! i really love this story. you are a great writer. please continue soon!

Please continue! I love this story!

I would like you to continue this story. I've been watching it for new chapters for a while. I tuned in about the 15th chapter. It is a original idea that I haven't seen much. Good Luck.

continue this fic !

Please continue

hey write more please, this is really good. and it's got dave in so it has to be cool

thanks

You have to continue. It is sooooooooooo good. Please write again soon.

i want you to finish it... i actually like this story... its a different idea that I never thought of before... good job!

one of the best dave fics. i have read.

pleaze continue! P

Yay - continue, continue!